/ Fantasy / Dying in the Middle of a Class Summoning
概要
With a world in danger, a ceremony summoned a group of heroes from another world, to help protect it. Yet, one of them happened to die in the process, and was given a slightly longer journey to the summoning. So let's see what type of journey this being has and all trials they will face until they reach the time where the heroes are summoned.
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レビューを書くIt started out fine but it quickly went downhill. The premise was interesting but the follow up was a disappointment. I was irked by the drop in quality. Copious amounts of grammatical errors within each chapter are not enough for me to drop a web novel. However, the author adding useless filler because he ran out of ideas, is rather more than enough reason to. The MC suddenly getting two new pets from thin air as a gift from the sun and moon? What did he do to obtain them? Absolutely nothing. The author just handed them to the MC. That's not proper story telling. Also the MC doesn't even receive the custom weapon that he was promised nearly 15 chapters ago. The Dwarf Chief spent 4 months making it, while the MC waited beside him. It's not even explained why!? The author just glosses over it and has the MC pick a sword for his little brother from the Dwarf Chief's collection. Then what was this entire arc about? Was it not about heading to the kingdom of Dwarfs for a custom weapon that won't be destroyed when used? The entire thing was filler. A complete waste of my patience. Stop calling this a gem people. If it's going to be anything, then it would be a piece of used charcoal, because it's a half baked attempt.
ネタバレを明かすNot much too say as its still in its infancy(story and protagonist) but it has a decent world build and character description without being to info dumpish. The story follows the protagonist and has multiple viewpoints without destroying the flow of the story. 5 Stars.
I think that this has a lot of potential, and the way that you have set the story up and created the characters has created an entertaining and enjoyable story that draws people in. I hope that you decide to focus a little more on this story as you will get more people reading it if it has more updates. P.S. The way he gets there is very different from other summonings so it drew me in once I saw the novel.
Meh. Really great for pleb readers, but not for me. I don’t care much for terrible grammar, but I can deal with it. Sh*tty plot development, on the other hand is the one thing that you should avoid at all cost, even when everything else seems fine. I mean it’s OK writing, but it’s a miss for me. Feels like a teenager writing a story and then an actual qualified writer editing the sh*t out of it, yikes. Wasted potential, try again next time with the reader in mind. Sorry it’s harsh but there’s way too many d*** suckers in the reviews, and if the novel is any indication, it’s gone to the author’s head.
A Mary Sue MC with multiple harem members hinted from the get go, not my cup of tea at all. How is he gonna grow as a character if he's already perfect. Nothing but powerwank, cringy harem drama, face slapping. What the point of introducing the class mate if they're gonna get skipped for 17 years.
ネタバレを明かすYou have a MC who had everything he ever wanted. A special power, money, goddesses that love him and him always being in the right. Literally the MC is blessed with luck that has been used as a plot driver so far. The MC was sent to the past in the new world as a royal dragon because he was killed while being summoned. There is also way too many cliches in this story and mini arcs that were pointlessly added as filler. The summary of this fic hasn't even started yet even after 30 chapters making it very misleading. I'd rather read a revenge plot of the kid who was being bullied than this young master who gets everything spoon fed to him. At least there would be a sense of ******* and development than what is found here. Rate: 3.6/5 cause its still a good story if you can stand the cliches.
My only complain and worry is that you wouldn't finish this work........i was sooooo dissapointed that you dropped rebirth in bleach, i mean that was one of the best fanfics out there with a good plot and cool oc, but then without warning you just went away, and now you give us this interesting and original novel and now i'm worried that i'd spend my time and effort all in vain by being unfinished or dropped again....so please do not drop this!!
Fantastic so far. Can’t wait for more!! I really like the twist on whole class reincarnation (pretty sure that’s what it is) and would love to see where you take this. 🤤👌
Another good novel DemonicPanda is writing, unfortunately the updates it's a little messy but every chapter compensate, another gem it's found here guys give a chance and you will not leave with any disappointment.
if you read the first couple chapters and get hooked hoping that he meets the classmates your wrong they dont even show up.......................
AUTHOR, I Absolutely love this book and can't help but notice that the chapters have been lacking for nearly a month. I understand that your mental and physical health is important but I would like an explanation as to why there have been none recently. Wether it's just that you can't be bothered to wrote it out or you've dropped it in the last 22 days(as writing this) but I would love to continue reading this if possible.
I want to give this 5 stars I really do, considering the fact that everytime it pops a new chapter I immediately read it. However, garbage release rate, way to many fillers, and overall lack of care from the author forces me to be harsh. Chapters are so rare that I constantly feel like hes dropped the novel rather then working on a new chap and then it turns out the 2 chapters he released in a month are nothing but a side show to make a reference to another novel with no actual impact on the story makes me pull hair out. Great premise and plenty of room for a fantastic novel.... makes me wish itd go premium if only so theres an actual frigging release rate. Give it a read and if you like it then shelf it and come back every 2 months so you have a decent 30 min of reading content. Author if youre reading this I love ya but maybe post an apology take a month break plan out the novel a bit get some friends and bounce ideas off them do what you gotta do i look forward to the rest and hope to change to 5 stars in the future.
Harem please his past fiancee with his future fiancee also make the future fiancee the demon princess !!!!!!!!!!! Harem please his past fiancee with his future fiancee also make the future fiancee the demon princess !!!!!!!!!!! Harem please his past fiancee with his future fiancee also make the future fiancee the demon princess !!!!!!!!!!! Harem please his past fiancee with his future fiancee also make the future fiancee the demon princess !!!!!!!!!!!
This story is good and is original. I haven't seen a person die before mid class summoning in any other story. all it needs is a bit of polish on it and u will realize it's not charcoal but diamonds. I hope the author won't drop if he does then he's passing up a unique story that could reach high in the rankings if work on.
The story is great and all but it hasn't been updated and that's a problem because you can't continue to read a book without pages.
Really good plot but really wishing you could update sooner I’m dying for more my guy. But Amadeus is a hell of a character but certain points you forget to let us know how he got here and such like the second awakening
It’s a very interesting story that takes a semi unique concept of isekai with status along with kingdom ruling, well thats the path it looks like it’s going towards, but otherwise the fact that the story is still young it’s a great read. I highly recommend this for anyone that likes the concept of reincarnation into fantasy worlds.
Its still in its early stages, but I have a feeling it will be a good one. Looking forward to the future chapters. If you are debating whether or not you should read this, then I highly suggest you read the first two chapters, that will give you a feel for the book. It only keeps improving after that.
作者 DemonicPanda
2.2. That's completly dumb. The dragon kingdom possess full legitimity to this mine and the forteress they are attaqued by the human kingdom and this last one got rekt. You're trying to tell me that even in this case for whatsoever reason, they have to listen to their demand ? Do you even know just a bit how politic works at this epoque ? In this situation, not only have the human kingdom to pay a compensation ( it can be a territory ), but they don't have a word to say about that, they are in the wrong. And even more, why would the dragon kingdom accept such a ****ed up condition ? You're telling me they captured a territory, but let the ennemi noble govern it ? Are you dumb ? Who would allow such a thing, there is no way they are loyal, that's like raising a worlf in a sheep field. That's fucking dumb. If this empire had to existe, it wouldn't be for more than 1 month.