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The Exceed System

Fantasy 34 章 1.1M ビュー
作者: Vanadhi_Lucia

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Avadhi Ranata, a novelist and an avid gamer "died" when his laptop charging cable suddenly burst with flame sparks and explode both his laptop along with his smartphone connected to it when he is writing a new chapter for his novel.
He is supposed to be electrocuted to death but he found himself transmigrated to a cultivation world along with an integrated system and two beautiful wives which is a manifestation from Virtual AI of both his laptop and his smartphone!

After he finished establishing a harem for himself right from the start, he begin to embark in an adventure in another world full of exciting wonders and mysteries filled with powerful cultivators and myriad monsters!

Completed The Quests!
Become Stronger!
Gathers The Harem!
Fight All Enemies!!!

Parents Strongly Cautioned

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Vanadhi_Lucia

First Wive.... Check. Second Wive.... Check. Now we will move on to our first concubine and witness the Awakening of a S.e.x Maniac ;) And after that..., Maybe I will add an Awesome Foursome chapter as the closing for the first day (and night) arc.

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Ekaye
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Te deseo suerte con la novela! . .

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Vanadhi_Lucia

Help! I can't stop write XXX Scene....! Bwahahahahaha! This is already two weeks and we're still stucks in night event. Sorry, Dear Readers, it's like an acute illness.

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Kamala_Nadhia

Nice, finally both the wives has been tasted, now let's enjoy the soon - to - be - a - slut virgin. Hehe. But why the hell did she still in the bathroom for an hour? did the heat goes up to her head? she must be masturbating inside while peeping on her master/

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Aiueoka_69on

Mantap poi, akhirnya kedua istrinya sudah dinikmati juga..... Sekarang tinggal si selir pertama yang entah kenapa masih mendem di dalam kamar mandi. Jangan - jangan mimisan sampai pingsan di dalam lagi , gara - gara ngintipin masternya lagi indehoy~

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Alif_Fariza

novel nya bagus dan bisa menghibur saya,terima kasih kepada sang penulis karena bisa menerbitkan novel ini untuk dibaca semua oranf[img=exp][img=strong]

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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact kenreview@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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Read 5 chapters until it was dropped. Written by, what I guess is an Indian author?, the story is smack full of grammar mistakes, elementary level English, and author notes inserted left and right. When I imagine an ******* author, this is what I can think of as the prime example. Constructive critique to the author; you have some.... novel... ideas. But you should really hire yourself and editor/proofreader in native English - or just write in your native language. I know this story is supposed to be light-hearted, but the lack of professionalism (e.g. writing it on the phone) really puts a lot of people off. Don't get me wrong; it isn't wrong to write novels on the phone, as inspiration comes randomly. But it IS wrong to publish straight from the phone, without having it reviewed first on paper or on the PC, where proper editing can be done - and this story clearly hasn't been edited before publishing. This degrades your story, and Webnovel as a platform.

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Horrid, I absolutely hated it, I hate everything about it, to the main character to all the other characters. Simply disgraceful. It just makes me sick.

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I am glad to have found another great story I think 😬😬😬😬😬😬at least it looks good from what I see of it for now I will give this story a read

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