Struggling as a Villain

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THEENDERMAN

This story is one of the best I've seen in all with great character dev and good plot with the perfect cliffhangers

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Rayyer

this just like every other brain rot content same generic mc,plot,character etc to fit all the self insert wish fulfillment fantasy here

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SOULONFLAME

Read till ch 17 The novel is great with very few plot holes that can be used as plot devices later. The Mc seems great, not wimpy and has personality There are yanderes The original world is also significant to the story Almost everything is great, except: Having only 17 free ch is a wasted opportunity, a huuuge waste I really want to read more but I would need to use my hard earned FP but I am not that invested in the story yet(cuz only 17 ch duh) I would rather spend those FP on novels that I am already following I wanted to read more but... :(

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RashCore

So, I thought why not? What can you expect from this story? Good interaction. Good Character Development. Okay-ish battles. Good romance+ eventual smut. And a load of Slice of Life. If you have any questions regarding the story, ask here.

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FIPEN

Author, could you add some beautiful pictures on this page so readers don’t have to keep going back and forth between chapters just to view them? Also, could you share the Discord invite link for this novel so we can hang out? You have a unique story, but one thing I’d like to see improved is how you switch between the two worlds. The sections about the sister and the MC feel a bit disjointed. Overall, I enjoy the novel and don’t want to leave a bad review. I just hope to see some improvements and even better chapters moving forward.

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Berry_Smoothie

The book is great, undated are stable but wish there was more chapters, and it’s a enjoyable read. 👍

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Kary_KD

Definitely a banger novel, read till 18 chapters and safe to say i found a masterpiece, author don't drop and please be consistent with the update, I really like the story, the mc and his interaction with other characters.

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jayjay_123

Garbage and not for me…goodluck to everyone else though

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Xilt

the power scale was a mesh, mc not using the system to the fullest was also stupid. also too many changes pov that it become confusing to understand.

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Holden_Makok

Thank goodness this app has limited free days. The story is better then I thought it would be, going forward, i will continue reading and will start purchasing chapters.

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JxstASyko

So far I’m hooked. I haven’t reached that far into story but the mystery between both of the worlds is piquing my curiosity and let’s not forget the yandere mother in his current world and yandere sister in original. Keep up the good work

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Admiral_Alex

Really good transmigration story with an interesting premise. Bellarine is best girl btw.

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DaoistS69MXM

Yandere supremacy 😤 Five stars all the way!

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samuel_fernandes_3408

If I had money, I would definitely read all the chapters of this delight. **********************************************************************************

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RosoviyR

It's a good book, but 15 chapters are too few to read, so I don't think it's possible to make a review .................................................

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DaoistZ9kkTa

The book has potential i must say so I'd recommend it to y'all to read. I know WB has done a number on us with the poison we've read but try this book. I was also hesitant but I gave it a try and I'm enjoying it right now. I usually dislike giving book reviews but for this one it definitely has potential to be very good if the author is consistent with what he has shown so far. For writing quality it's one of if not the best I've seen on Webnovel so a 5. For the story development, so far it's looking good and we are looking to see what the author plans to do so a 4, character design is great, the relations between the characters in the story allows you the reader to immerse yourself in the story without making the story feel bland, it's realistic enough and you can see that thought and creativity were put behind the dialogues and interactions, so that's a 5. World background I give a 3 cos so far there hasn't been any real expansion on the world in general and how things work, from culture to the food, to even the currency and the continents and races and what not but I'm sure it will be properly expanded on in the academy arc so a 3 for now. Lastly my issue is the updates it's a bit inconsistent but manageable, though i hope there will be consistency in updates pretty soon cos for a book to survive on Webnovel consistent updates is a must, else this book won't survive and it has a good potential so i wanna see this book become quite renowned, hence overall the book rating is a 4 for now and subject to a possible edited review if the book goes far and doesn't get dropped.

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Nikhil_Singh_6863

awesome story, really engaging read all chapters, waiting for new chapters to be released, also i really wanted to see what the characters would look like in real life, mainly Duchess Bellarine, so i used the novel cover illustration to get the character image created, here is the image for my fellow readers to see as well, and if the author thinks it matches what you imagined while writing then i guess you should add it on the novel page,

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Kary_KD

Author, I really like all 3 of your novels, especially this one that introduced me to your work. easily 4.6+/5, an easy recommendation.

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Sloth_Reader

to be honest, I started reading this on a whim, but as I read more and more chapters, I really got hooked. It's refreshing to see a mc that is not only focused on his goals but can also take care of his lovers. Another thing is the fact that the so-called lovers aren't just weak women who can't even fight, but women who can actually kill even before the mc arrive. A perfect blend of action and romance at its finest