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Really like this novel so far, will you keep udating? Do you have any kind of social media or discord I can follow to know the updating time? Thanks x.
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
I believe that this entire writing style is more personal in that it includes a lot of references that other similar novels simply don't have. Most just make the mc disconnected from the games and other mass media and are often irrational to an extreme.
FREE ENTRY CONTEST! Contend for a total of $30,000！！！ Hi! Many authors have won big cash prizes in our SWA II. Now Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I is hot in progress. It is your turn to win with your suspense stories and thrillers this time. We have a financial support program for every entry, not to mention the access to the grand prizes and publishing your books in hardcover. Just imagine your book on the shelf with a best-seller golden label! Both posted stories and new stories can join us. Don't miss this chance, as your writing deserves much more. Join us now! Please email adaren06*@*gmail.com (delete *). for more details.
When i read this at first i thought meh just another of those boring and repititive isekai novel i read but as the story progress it became much more interesting like for real haha i even finish it in a day hope you continue writing this as this is officially one of the novel ill read fufu thanks
Amazing book but no clue if it still exists or not I will be putting a review every day till it restarts because ones it gets 500k you get paid I think
It's an average story, some might like it and some might hate it. Not really sure about the stability of updates, so I gave it a three, but everything else is fairly average. Not particularly terrible, but also not great. I think I can safely give this one threes across the board.
I like it not much else to say ............................................,,,., woot ........................................ Why does this have to be 140 characters 😑
A solid Story with everything I like. The Author said luckily that he won't drop the story! I can wait between 1 month (as I don't expect my self to life longer than that) and 3 years (as I have a bad memorie and I will forget things more easily) for the next chapter, no more than that. I really hope that a new chapter comes out bevor I die, or worse I forget about this story!! Good Luck Author, This Suicidal Brain Dead Mad Human loves your story!
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It's an amazing story. NEVER GIVE UP! (Also more cappys please) 12121t7sfgwyrft8ehgfi76w5egogrh8wyghdryfgk7ew5ghsfuerhgo8y7ew5gudfhg8o7fdshguihrey8ghserughst78girsehguy5eghp9ue5hgu8sdrhguyhsrtgbiuhstbustriughn
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
It's cool and I can't wait for another chapter to drop the story was very engaging I like where it's heading !!!!!!!!!!!!!!![img=exp][img=update][img=recommend]
This is a great story. Awesome world building, great comedy, all around great read. But I cannot read anymore of this good novel, purely based on the fact that I absolutely hate it when a perfectly good non-humanoid mc, becomes humanoid. I liked the dungeon core vibes. Liked how he was building his dungeon island. Then he went and made a homunculus. That’s where I clock out. Sorry for the rant, but I really needed to get this off my chest. It bugs me every time I drop a great novel, but it’s just not something I can get over.
Is this dead? Still gonna add and read it but still gotta ask. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Please continue if you can it's funny and a good story it would be a shame to stop it here and now I will be writing random stuff to reach character minimum.
I like it, although would want more chapter or a schedule it is fine. Can you add more MH monsters........ But do keep going.......... It's one of my favorite.
This novel is different from the other dungeon core novels. The MC is actually the dungeon core and not the dungeon master. So far the author has done a great job in creating a unique world in which the reader can delve into. Great novel.😎 Please continue this story.😁 I really like it.🤩
Good story but the releaserate for new chapters is way to low Good story but the releaserate for new chapters is way to low Good story but the releaserate for new chapters is way to low Good story but the releaserate for new chapters is way to low Good story but the releaserate for new chapters is way to low Good story but the releaserate for new chapters is way to low
I like it and it’s a nice read in between 2 more serious novels. Easy enough to follow and full to the brim with jokes and references. Overall a good book.
The story remind me of how overlord (the light novel not the movie) does character development and world building it show how the world reacts or a least a small part of it.
I love this and I want more plz :'( I want more MH monster and an description of fight kind of BIG monster versus BIG monster and see the reac xD
😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😂😂😂😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😊😊😊😊😊😊🤔🤔🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
I like this novel quite a lot :) 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 (looking forward to more updates/chapters)
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no chapters? 3 years no chapters? why no chapter? wah happened? not fun to continue story no more?
Really like this novel so far, will you keep udating? Do you have any kind of social media or discord I can follow to know the updating time? Thanks x.
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
I believe that this entire writing style is more personal in that it includes a lot of references that other similar novels simply don't have. Most just make the mc disconnected from the games and other mass media and are often irrational to an extreme.
FREE ENTRY CONTEST! Contend for a total of $30,000！！！ Hi! Many authors have won big cash prizes in our SWA II. Now Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I is hot in progress. It is your turn to win with your suspense stories and thrillers this time. We have a financial support program for every entry, not to mention the access to the grand prizes and publishing your books in hardcover. Just imagine your book on the shelf with a best-seller golden label! Both posted stories and new stories can join us. Don't miss this chance, as your writing deserves much more. Join us now! Please email adaren06*@*gmail.com (delete *). for more details.
When i read this at first i thought meh just another of those boring and repititive isekai novel i read but as the story progress it became much more interesting like for real haha i even finish it in a day hope you continue writing this as this is officially one of the novel ill read fufu thanks
Amazing book but no clue if it still exists or not I will be putting a review every day till it restarts because ones it gets 500k you get paid I think
It's an average story, some might like it and some might hate it. Not really sure about the stability of updates, so I gave it a three, but everything else is fairly average. Not particularly terrible, but also not great. I think I can safely give this one threes across the board.
I like it not much else to say ............................................,,,., woot ........................................ Why does this have to be 140 characters 😑
A solid Story with everything I like. The Author said luckily that he won't drop the story! I can wait between 1 month (as I don't expect my self to life longer than that) and 3 years (as I have a bad memorie and I will forget things more easily) for the next chapter, no more than that. I really hope that a new chapter comes out bevor I die, or worse I forget about this story!! Good Luck Author, This Suicidal Brain Dead Mad Human loves your story!
creative good awesomecreative good awesomecreative good awesomecreative good awesomecreative good awesomecreative good awesomecreative good awesome
👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
It's an amazing story. NEVER GIVE UP! (Also more cappys please) 12121t7sfgwyrft8ehgfi76w5egogrh8wyghdryfgk7ew5ghsfuerhgo8y7ew5gudfhg8o7fdshguihrey8ghserughst78girsehguy5eghp9ue5hgu8sdrhguyhsrtgbiuhstbustriughn
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
It's cool and I can't wait for another chapter to drop the story was very engaging I like where it's heading !!!!!!!!!!!!!!![img=exp][img=update][img=recommend]
This is a great story. Awesome world building, great comedy, all around great read. But I cannot read anymore of this good novel, purely based on the fact that I absolutely hate it when a perfectly good non-humanoid mc, becomes humanoid. I liked the dungeon core vibes. Liked how he was building his dungeon island. Then he went and made a homunculus. That’s where I clock out. Sorry for the rant, but I really needed to get this off my chest. It bugs me every time I drop a great novel, but it’s just not something I can get over.
Is this dead? Still gonna add and read it but still gotta ask. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Please continue if you can it's funny and a good story it would be a shame to stop it here and now I will be writing random stuff to reach character minimum.
I like it, although would want more chapter or a schedule it is fine. Can you add more MH monsters........ But do keep going.......... It's one of my favorite.
This novel is different from the other dungeon core novels. The MC is actually the dungeon core and not the dungeon master. So far the author has done a great job in creating a unique world in which the reader can delve into. Great novel.😎 Please continue this story.😁 I really like it.🤩
Good story but the releaserate for new chapters is way to low Good story but the releaserate for new chapters is way to low Good story but the releaserate for new chapters is way to low Good story but the releaserate for new chapters is way to low Good story but the releaserate for new chapters is way to low Good story but the releaserate for new chapters is way to low
I like it and it’s a nice read in between 2 more serious novels. Easy enough to follow and full to the brim with jokes and references. Overall a good book.
The story remind me of how overlord (the light novel not the movie) does character development and world building it show how the world reacts or a least a small part of it.
I love this and I want more plz :'( I want more MH monster and an description of fight kind of BIG monster versus BIG monster and see the reac xD
😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😂😂😂😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣😊😊😊😊😊😊🤔🤔🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
I like this novel quite a lot :) 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 (looking forward to more updates/chapters)
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no chapters? 3 years no chapters? why no chapter? wah happened? not fun to continue story no more?