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Feel free to leave a review if you haven't already. It would help me improve the story as well as give me more motivation to write it too. As long as you write a review of what you think about my story, I'll be satisfied (It's not like I'm not satisfied already... It's been a blast writing this story, and I plan to keep the chapters going for a while)
This is a great story. YeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeah
ネタバレを明かす It is great with you turning into a fish. CLASSIC. ... COMEDY GOLD RIGHT THERE. *WINK* :) 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😂😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
ネタバレを明かす This actually awesome. I can't wait for more content. I have never been so excited to read before.. Like I have never something so interesting before... Please put another chapter out soon!
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Looking for ward for more interesting plots. Not much can comments as it got 1 chapters only ..lol Need more chapters to see how it goes Need 140 words to comments ,,,sigh
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Feel free to leave a review if you haven't already. It would help me improve the story as well as give me more motivation to write it too. As long as you write a review of what you think about my story, I'll be satisfied (It's not like I'm not satisfied already... It's been a blast writing this story, and I plan to keep the chapters going for a while)
This is a great story. YeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeahYeah
ネタバレを明かす It is great with you turning into a fish. CLASSIC. ... COMEDY GOLD RIGHT THERE. *WINK* :) 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😂😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
ネタバレを明かす This actually awesome. I can't wait for more content. I have never been so excited to read before.. Like I have never something so interesting before... Please put another chapter out soon!
Awesomeawesomeawesomeawesome Awesomeawesomeawesomeawesome Awesomeawesomeawesomeawesome Awesomeawesomeawesomeawesome AwesomeawAwesomeawesomeawesomeawesomeAwesomeawesomeawesomeawesomeAwesomeawesomeawesomeawesomeAwesomeawesomeawesomeawesomeAwesomeawesomeawesomeawesomeAwesomeawesomeawesomeawesomeAwesomeawesomeawesomeawesomeAwesomeawesomeawesomeawesomeAwesomeawesomeawesomeawesomeesomeawesomeawesome
Looking for ward for more interesting plots. Not much can comments as it got 1 chapters only ..lol Need more chapters to see how it goes Need 140 words to comments ,,,sigh
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