Fight!

LV 10

GreasyBeer

Okay, obviously, it's too early to review this novel since it has only a single chapter as of now. But I know of good novels that got neglected by the author because of a lack of feedback so here I am to hopefully prevent the same fate befall this novel. The first thing that stroke me was the rich vocabulary rarely seen on WN. That means either the author has a good grasp on the language or he/she is willing to put in the extra effort, both of which are good news for us readers. After that, came the action. Which indicated we, the readers, won't need to suffer through torturous info dumps that everyone hates. Another welcome change from the usual, poorly written novels here. My only complain about the novel(or rather the first chapter) is the excessive usage of the name of the MC, Alex. It's not braking the immersion but still it's a bit annoying. Overall, this novel has a promising start. I would like to thank the author for the hard work he/she put in writing this chapter and I hope he/she keeps up the good work.