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Kidnapped (Book 1 & 2)

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A girl named Elizabeth. She got kidnapped since she was 10 years old, and then a year later that her uncle found her. Then the guy that kidnapped her is a mystery guy, and he got the way with it at Court. That Mystery guy got interest in Elizabeth, but Elizabeth got confused why that he didn't go to jail for. Then 15 years later, she got kidnap again by a different guy, and he is very young like Elizabeth. Then she asked him what was his name, and he said that his name is Louis. But she never seen his face, he told her something that she can believe so easy. He said that he was the son that kidnapped her 15 years ago, and she was shocked about it. One day that she tried to escape him, but it didn't work. He is so smart that he could read people minds. A week later while she was in chains, she was sleeping, and he came to her closer and closer. Then he kiss her, and she didn't notice at all. But one day that he told her that he did. She said.........
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elenaforest

It is a very good story the background the plot is very good I just want that she find justice for herself and I really want to read the for the chapters and I would like to say Elizabeth don't lose hope we are with you will find a way . Thank you for these three chapters and I am waiting for more

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kyralovessloths19

this book is awesome. please just keep writing. thanks I love how both brothers are in love with her. I wonder what will happen when jake gets his hands on beth...

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queen_ariel89

Please make more but not this short. And more chapters and more clearly. I would get lost a bit when I would read it. Aside from that’s it was great

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queen_ariel89

I think your a first timer and I’m glad keep up the good work. Please try to get in to more detail and I know it’s hard but please make it longer. Everything is good just needs more details and climax here and there

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  • テキストの品質
  • アップデートの安定性
  • ストーリー展開
  • キャラクターデザイン
  • 世界の背景

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