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Universe Download Manager

Fantasy 22 章 246.2K ビュー
作者: yu_now

4.78 (13 レビュー結果)

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Meet Li Feng in other world adventure and with a system in his soul which will help him to make everything ok for him.
Li Feng: System
System: User call me manager.
Li Feng: can you change your voice to a female one.
System: Are you the owner? Are you an admin? You are only a user.
Li Feng: Can I download heavenly fighting technique.
System: yes
Li Feng: plz download
System: downloading start estimated time to complete download data ( 142 years and 5 months 3 days and 21 minutes.)
Li Feng: fuck
System: the searching result of fuck, .......... sorry loading took long because of downloading the search is stopped.
Li Feng: @#&%*<#!

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yu_now

Hello, guys, Arthur sama is here It is the first time I writing a novel so plz o easy on me chapter update may be slow so I sorry in advance and enjoy it

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TRASH_KING

writing Quality is ok Story development is also nice Character design is great World background is also well explained but y is update is slow

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akiisenpai

Story design is different than other i think its gonna be fun to read . I think hero is gonna be cool . And for a advice to all internet users dont mess up with ur internet cable xD Need more chapters update soon

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TRASH_KING

Unique story from Synopsis description and only read first chap is good and have potential please update soon waiting for more chap chap chap sigh 140 words

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newthings

one of the funniest system novel, need more chapters //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

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zacke
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love this novel please don't drop it and more chapter, please make hero a little evil 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140

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amvs
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need more chapters update is slow the story is interesting and the background is good and mc is an army cadet. I like the army and again more chapters

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krito
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So the first three chapters were a type of prolonged. well It's looking interesting and System is little funny but our mc is really pity full when it came to relatives and now he betrayed by his friend. Make our Mc evil hahaha

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zd4zaaa

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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amvs
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plz update more chapters I like the funny talk between the system and user so plz update more and more plz plz plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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ali11
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well a system novel with evil mc I m in go go go go go go I m waiting for more chaps writer update soon more chaps more chaps more chaps more chaps more and more

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zacke
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the update is slow but the story got potential so don't drop it in middle and 140 characters 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140

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leox
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the story is good and the background is well defined and mc is a little poor soul but that system got some potential so write more chapters dude.

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