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blueberrysoft

I have just completed reading this novel. Overall it's very good! ! Unexpectedly. I love how the author don't really "prolong" the story plot. It's rather a "compact" story development. The ending is a bit like rushed, but that's okay. Some of things to be face-slapped are not really described too detailed, but the main plot is cleared vividly.

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heminasti

I'd say the first third of this was pretty satisfying. A standard soapy drama with baby swaps and reincarnation. A contrived but satisfying plot with enemies dating back generations. A likable ML and a FL with potential. But as it gets to the second third, it drags along with progress mostly based on the FL refusing to take basic security precautions. It spends more time recounting her eating pounds of seafood everyday than on the plot. She constantly talks about wanting to become strong and finds her goals and abilities blocked by her physical condition, but she never works on it, just uses it as an excuse as to delaying things. I almost dropped it at that point and started skipping and skimming chapters to find out what happens. Until finally there is a rushed ending that only mostly wraps things up, leaving loose ends, but at least checking the most important todos off.

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Bookworm_0303

I enjoyed this book, though it got a but too fast in the end. But I still like how it's not too long. I like how the emotions between the leads are real, though some may view it as too dramatic. But I think these are things that real people encounter in their relationships. The story is good in tugging at your emotions and you really end up feeling for the characters. I had a lot of cry and laughing moments while reading this book and have throughly enjoyed it. 😊

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Veronica_Finlayson

this story was so enjoyable I couldn't put it down. thanks sor entertaining me so much

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Bookworm_0303

I truly enjoyed this story. It's very heartwarming and although there were instances where it tugs at your heart string, it's the feel good kind. :) I truly recommend for those who want a feel good story without the twist and turns of discord between the leads. :)

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Peach_Immortal

I love this novel a lot. I don't understand why I saw it on Light Reader but then I realized why. No one would want their books like that. Therefore, to support the author, it's Webnovel all the way! Let's begin to read!

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Rudelfa

It's very nice story! I satisfied the ending of this story not like the others stories that the ending it's not good! To the writer of this story I'm very proud of you!!!

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AaiShi_MaiTy

okkk....other than other's comment i just want to say is that the fl is toooo selfwilled ...where she should have strong minded , she became kind ...and even cruel villans many chances which caused many accidents.

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SilenceInTheNight

Had read it before and fell inlove with it.[img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Seng_M
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If u think this book is racist then DONT READ! All the novel in webnovel is all about mostly Asian culture. If you not Asian I don’t think you will understand cause this is not about racism it just how Asian view of the beauty standards they have and the history we are going talking about here. Stop taking it so seriously while reading this fiction novel. Why don’ we just have some fun and enjoy reading the book hmm? If you don’t like it you may pass from this book. The story is not hurting you at all it just make the story make up a whole story . It’s why we are here reading fiction story.

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jjfgjsr
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DeepThinkingBanana

I really like the plot. I think it is promising but a shame it ended with just 543 chapters. There is a lot of things happening and the author introduced quite a number of people with, would I say could be promising in the story's development. But they just pop out like mushroom and then popped like bubble. Thus, I have an inkling that this story shouldn't have been at chapter 543. Yes, they have resolved most issues and dealt with most villains but what about that person behind the Qin Family? What about the Tan Family who was Tang Xi's Maternal family? And isn't there something going on with Jin Han's Family that might be related with Lu Li? Why introduce them to us and let us peak on their story without giving it any resolve? I think it would be great cause they might be in cahoots with that William bit then he just got caught. I guess what I want to say is, I am barely full with this meal. And I still crave some more. That's besides the fact of the glaring racism at beginning. Then, let's not forget the names being used which frustrated me and other things. In the end, for me this could've been better.

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Villainess_Fan_0

I think it was a really good read . I loved the whole process but it definitely ended pretty abruptly and a bit rushed. It left some open endings for some characters to let you assume and think of the result. I feel like it can definitely do epilogues and then I would be satisfied with how this ended. But if it doesn't ,it always feels a little incomplete to me because the climb was so good, but at the end it ended in one chapter suddenly 😭🥲❤️

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Vanbun
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another typical reincarnation cliche story, yet i don't know why I still finish it; maybe just to see how it actually end. The author try to add too many thing into this storyline that it felt like there has no development. Tang xi has the system to help her but there at time the system is just useless. Also at some point the story became to unrealistic with how everything is unfolding; it lack development in a lot of area from character to storyline. I'm not sure if it was the translation of the author purpose but it was always written as 'tang xi' when they are talking about 'xiao ruo' which can be confusing. The only good thing is that somehow the storyline still ties together when though it was clearly rush to complete. This novel would be something i would recommend to read unless you're just looking for a cliche novel that is already complete. Overall it not bad but not the best either.

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Marcy_Martin

this is a great story. could not put it down. keep on writing. the imagination is spot on pulls a person into the story. more books please please

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Orainfourteen

Bhoho How about jing, sa and yan.. Who's the lucky girl who'll marry them.. Author i need side story about them.. Especially jing and his little secretary 🥲 ..

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XiJinpingaMurderer

Suspension of disbelief is wayyyyyy whack. I'm sorry, but unless this story occurs in a magical universe, no sane person will believe in reincarnation after a single conversation or two.

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kenshin_x

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ReadingFiend

TLDR: Don’t waste your time. Even though it is short, there a lot of inconsistances and the editor couldnt be bothered with correcting names. The last 4 chapters only describe what happens and never explains anything about the system or the main villian behind the antagonists in the story. There is nothing worse than getting to the end of a story and being like “That’s it?” and “What about x, y, & z?” I regret reading this story to the and I dont recommend it to anyone. The Female Lead (FL) has a system after her soul migrates to a new body in the same worls but that system is pretty much barely used at all. She gets so weak after using the deus ex machina powers once, that she needs hospitalization after minor incidents justifying the Male Lead (ML) obsessive need to protect her. The person who created the system and how the system ended up in the FL are introduced but never explored. Same with the supposed final villian whos trying to create the system (maybe? never really explored). This story is filled with topics and ideas that are introduced and then dropped promptly forgotten about. Even major things like who knows what secret and when they knew them. In addition the editing of the names is just bad. I get that the subject is implied in Chinese but when traslating to English, the correct subject needs to be used. Dont use ML name when the subject is antagonist 3. Do not mix up male and female pronouns. Do not use FL as both the subject and direct object in a sentance when they are clearly not beating themselves up or or talking down to themselves. It was a confusing and frustrating read that started out with a good premise that never lives up to itself. I suspect even the author was tired of the story at the end which is why she disnt continue and just ended it.

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kenshin_x

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bongosandpizza

I have only a few things to say. I had a smile on my face the entire time The characters felt real Its honestly a good story The face slapping is actually good So overall, read this story, you wont regret it

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dhar94

it is a good novel. Though there are a few confusing details it is a good one with fast pace. the first half is slow paced while the ending is fast paced.

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Sherly_Rose

[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] I like to read story like this novel, hope to read more genre like this one, or another novel that for the brothers 💜💜

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RebeccaJWW

I really enjoyed reading this story. the cast of characters are great. everyone has well developed personalities and there is actual character growth with the biological parents. There are consequences and long term issues that feel realistic. The identity crisis of the MC is understandable, but also annoying at times. She keeps trying to reconcile her orecious life and her new one. however, the number of people that knew both are limited. so for the most part, its not the body she has now, but the person she is that the people around her care about. She is a new person, but seems to dwell on the fact that she was one person and is in the body of another. Also, she keeps talking about the things that really matter to her, certain people, but she dithers instead of just focusing on what will make her happy. doing design, but then monologing about how its not as important to her as the people she loves.Saying she wants to marry and have a family with the ML as soon as possible, but then talking about studying design in Paris and getting all the diploma’s that she had in her previous life. she can speak multiple languages, does she really need to spend years in classrooms to get the bit of paper again when its not like anything she is going to do will require it? It just feels at times like she is standing in her own way. She has so many things that she wants to do, but seems to be doing the things that are on the bottom of the list instead of the ones that are the most important to her. if it was fear, it would be understandable, but it doesnt seem like that. it seems more like she is doing doing everything now instead of focusing on the most important things that were her biggest regrets. Aside from this, the story has a decent pace, the characters are well developed and fun. I like her brothers and bio brother, her adopted parents and her funny school friend/fan girl. Am also in love with the ML. Some funny bits, some cute bits. its a solid story. I am an impatient person, so i do want to shake the MC a bit and tell her to talk to her grandpa, shack up with the ML and just be herself. She has never acted like the new her, so aside from a name, she is virtually the same person, so she doesn’t need to worry about her identity so much.

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kenshin_x

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Izanami_

If I have to describe it in one word it would just awesome. I really liked the story. But the ending is too rushed. But still it's a happy ending so it's ok. I really recommend it to everyone.

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blueberrysoft

I have just completed reading this novel. Overall it's very good! ! Unexpectedly. I love how the author don't really "prolong" the story plot. It's rather a "compact" story development. The ending is a bit like rushed, but that's okay. Some of things to be face-slapped are not really described too detailed, but the main plot is cleared vividly.

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heminasti

I'd say the first third of this was pretty satisfying. A standard soapy drama with baby swaps and reincarnation. A contrived but satisfying plot with enemies dating back generations. A likable ML and a FL with potential. But as it gets to the second third, it drags along with progress mostly based on the FL refusing to take basic security precautions. It spends more time recounting her eating pounds of seafood everyday than on the plot. She constantly talks about wanting to become strong and finds her goals and abilities blocked by her physical condition, but she never works on it, just uses it as an excuse as to delaying things. I almost dropped it at that point and started skipping and skimming chapters to find out what happens. Until finally there is a rushed ending that only mostly wraps things up, leaving loose ends, but at least checking the most important todos off.

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Bookworm_0303

I enjoyed this book, though it got a but too fast in the end. But I still like how it's not too long. I like how the emotions between the leads are real, though some may view it as too dramatic. But I think these are things that real people encounter in their relationships. The story is good in tugging at your emotions and you really end up feeling for the characters. I had a lot of cry and laughing moments while reading this book and have throughly enjoyed it. 😊

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Veronica_Finlayson

this story was so enjoyable I couldn't put it down. thanks sor entertaining me so much

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Bookworm_0303

I truly enjoyed this story. It's very heartwarming and although there were instances where it tugs at your heart string, it's the feel good kind. :) I truly recommend for those who want a feel good story without the twist and turns of discord between the leads. :)

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Peach_Immortal

I love this novel a lot. I don't understand why I saw it on Light Reader but then I realized why. No one would want their books like that. Therefore, to support the author, it's Webnovel all the way! Let's begin to read!

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Rudelfa

It's very nice story! I satisfied the ending of this story not like the others stories that the ending it's not good! To the writer of this story I'm very proud of you!!!

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AaiShi_MaiTy

okkk....other than other's comment i just want to say is that the fl is toooo selfwilled ...where she should have strong minded , she became kind ...and even cruel villans many chances which caused many accidents.

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SilenceInTheNight

Had read it before and fell inlove with it.[img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Seng_M
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If u think this book is racist then DONT READ! All the novel in webnovel is all about mostly Asian culture. If you not Asian I don’t think you will understand cause this is not about racism it just how Asian view of the beauty standards they have and the history we are going talking about here. Stop taking it so seriously while reading this fiction novel. Why don’ we just have some fun and enjoy reading the book hmm? If you don’t like it you may pass from this book. The story is not hurting you at all it just make the story make up a whole story . It’s why we are here reading fiction story.

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jjfgjsr
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DeepThinkingBanana

I really like the plot. I think it is promising but a shame it ended with just 543 chapters. There is a lot of things happening and the author introduced quite a number of people with, would I say could be promising in the story's development. But they just pop out like mushroom and then popped like bubble. Thus, I have an inkling that this story shouldn't have been at chapter 543. Yes, they have resolved most issues and dealt with most villains but what about that person behind the Qin Family? What about the Tan Family who was Tang Xi's Maternal family? And isn't there something going on with Jin Han's Family that might be related with Lu Li? Why introduce them to us and let us peak on their story without giving it any resolve? I think it would be great cause they might be in cahoots with that William bit then he just got caught. I guess what I want to say is, I am barely full with this meal. And I still crave some more. That's besides the fact of the glaring racism at beginning. Then, let's not forget the names being used which frustrated me and other things. In the end, for me this could've been better.

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Villainess_Fan_0

I think it was a really good read . I loved the whole process but it definitely ended pretty abruptly and a bit rushed. It left some open endings for some characters to let you assume and think of the result. I feel like it can definitely do epilogues and then I would be satisfied with how this ended. But if it doesn't ,it always feels a little incomplete to me because the climb was so good, but at the end it ended in one chapter suddenly 😭🥲❤️

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Vanbun
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another typical reincarnation cliche story, yet i don't know why I still finish it; maybe just to see how it actually end. The author try to add too many thing into this storyline that it felt like there has no development. Tang xi has the system to help her but there at time the system is just useless. Also at some point the story became to unrealistic with how everything is unfolding; it lack development in a lot of area from character to storyline. I'm not sure if it was the translation of the author purpose but it was always written as 'tang xi' when they are talking about 'xiao ruo' which can be confusing. The only good thing is that somehow the storyline still ties together when though it was clearly rush to complete. This novel would be something i would recommend to read unless you're just looking for a cliche novel that is already complete. Overall it not bad but not the best either.

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Marcy_Martin

this is a great story. could not put it down. keep on writing. the imagination is spot on pulls a person into the story. more books please please

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Orainfourteen

Bhoho How about jing, sa and yan.. Who's the lucky girl who'll marry them.. Author i need side story about them.. Especially jing and his little secretary 🥲 ..

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XiJinpingaMurderer

Suspension of disbelief is wayyyyyy whack. I'm sorry, but unless this story occurs in a magical universe, no sane person will believe in reincarnation after a single conversation or two.

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kenshin_x

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ReadingFiend

TLDR: Don’t waste your time. Even though it is short, there a lot of inconsistances and the editor couldnt be bothered with correcting names. The last 4 chapters only describe what happens and never explains anything about the system or the main villian behind the antagonists in the story. There is nothing worse than getting to the end of a story and being like “That’s it?” and “What about x, y, & z?” I regret reading this story to the and I dont recommend it to anyone. The Female Lead (FL) has a system after her soul migrates to a new body in the same worls but that system is pretty much barely used at all. She gets so weak after using the deus ex machina powers once, that she needs hospitalization after minor incidents justifying the Male Lead (ML) obsessive need to protect her. The person who created the system and how the system ended up in the FL are introduced but never explored. Same with the supposed final villian whos trying to create the system (maybe? never really explored). This story is filled with topics and ideas that are introduced and then dropped promptly forgotten about. Even major things like who knows what secret and when they knew them. In addition the editing of the names is just bad. I get that the subject is implied in Chinese but when traslating to English, the correct subject needs to be used. Dont use ML name when the subject is antagonist 3. Do not mix up male and female pronouns. Do not use FL as both the subject and direct object in a sentance when they are clearly not beating themselves up or or talking down to themselves. It was a confusing and frustrating read that started out with a good premise that never lives up to itself. I suspect even the author was tired of the story at the end which is why she disnt continue and just ended it.

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I have only a few things to say. I had a smile on my face the entire time The characters felt real Its honestly a good story The face slapping is actually good So overall, read this story, you wont regret it

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it is a good novel. Though there are a few confusing details it is a good one with fast pace. the first half is slow paced while the ending is fast paced.

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[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] I like to read story like this novel, hope to read more genre like this one, or another novel that for the brothers 💜💜

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I really enjoyed reading this story. the cast of characters are great. everyone has well developed personalities and there is actual character growth with the biological parents. There are consequences and long term issues that feel realistic. The identity crisis of the MC is understandable, but also annoying at times. She keeps trying to reconcile her orecious life and her new one. however, the number of people that knew both are limited. so for the most part, its not the body she has now, but the person she is that the people around her care about. She is a new person, but seems to dwell on the fact that she was one person and is in the body of another. Also, she keeps talking about the things that really matter to her, certain people, but she dithers instead of just focusing on what will make her happy. doing design, but then monologing about how its not as important to her as the people she loves.Saying she wants to marry and have a family with the ML as soon as possible, but then talking about studying design in Paris and getting all the diploma’s that she had in her previous life. she can speak multiple languages, does she really need to spend years in classrooms to get the bit of paper again when its not like anything she is going to do will require it? It just feels at times like she is standing in her own way. She has so many things that she wants to do, but seems to be doing the things that are on the bottom of the list instead of the ones that are the most important to her. if it was fear, it would be understandable, but it doesnt seem like that. it seems more like she is doing doing everything now instead of focusing on the most important things that were her biggest regrets. Aside from this, the story has a decent pace, the characters are well developed and fun. I like her brothers and bio brother, her adopted parents and her funny school friend/fan girl. Am also in love with the ML. Some funny bits, some cute bits. its a solid story. I am an impatient person, so i do want to shake the MC a bit and tell her to talk to her grandpa, shack up with the ML and just be herself. She has never acted like the new her, so aside from a name, she is virtually the same person, so she doesn’t need to worry about her identity so much.

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If I have to describe it in one word it would just awesome. I really liked the story. But the ending is too rushed. But still it's a happy ending so it's ok. I really recommend it to everyone.

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