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This story is amazing and unique. I am so hooked on the characters. I love the plot and everything about this book. I would like to Inform you that NovelStar is having a competition, you might want to join. https://author.starlight.ink/essay/index.html
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I really like your novel The writing is good I love how the story was written I love how it was developed and the background of the story is beautiful
I really like this book. Reincarnation? Yes. True love? 100% Revenge? Please! Face slapping? YES! Family? Gotta love it! Happily Ever after? Thank god
I love this novel, and it is a worth it to read it. I don't mind the so called "racism" because I focus myself to the plot of the story. I think, those who think that this novel is not good please let your heart and mind open because the novel never stated to discriminate other culture or race right? give this novel a try. Thank you!
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When I read some of the comments, I thought the novel might not be authentic enough and would rather be a copy of other novels. Thankfully I gave this novel a chance as other comments said it was worth your while, because it definitely is! I think the story is original, funny and well written. Although I’m at chapter 55 now, I definitely recommend reading this novel!
I quite like this novel. I never like much story abt system because I have try read several story with this route, but this one is good! Although sometimes I feel the system didn't need in this story, transmigration modern-modern (reborn) is enough. This is quite fast story, at first I'm shock because the secret abt her still alive can be known to others too early. So, after that surprise thorough story I can calm down and enjoy it. Well, people isn't perfect so every character have made mistake inc ML FL... But OK TangXi/XiaoRou is awesome girl/woman 😍 superb, but one thing is I dislike how weak her body is till almost at end suddenly strong because of that point. I guess this story deserved more longer chapter (+200-400 #atleast below 1000 chapter, 543 chapters isn't enough --> many unanswered questions). Long Qiao Group & Long Qiao Organization is lead with same person but ok did Long Organization is terrorist or not? Unclear .... I wish to know more abt ML *Qiao Liang* - flashbacks during his childhood, how they meet & survive on that hell island. Up 400 chapters everything seems more rushing, many cp in this story that should be highlight more since the author write abt them... Ofc many more things I wish to list tho. I'm glad LuLi is fine at the end tho... But during their wedding, I'm sure it's hard to list every important character - side/support role but I'm miss Chu Ling, didn't mention abt him at all. Well I love her 3 brothers Xiao 💖 but I wish Yao have more scene, her mommy and daddy is sweetest parents I luv them! This novel have a lot good things to explored more, so if the author make an season 2 for this story I'm surely read!
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I like dis story ..nice plot and superb loving family towards fl and ml and fl both deja vu.. I completed it wanna read more this type entertaining...
I am not done with the book yet but I've read over 50% of it, ur creativity is nice , the idea is also nice, immediately I started Reading I loved the book instantly but as time went on .... I figured you had given the main male character too much speciality as tho he was perfect, although we all know he struggled but there were some parts that felt too annoying to read (for me idk about others ) like when he fought with yao I felt you should have made yao beat him so we'll all know it wasn't a typical "cliche" or when he kicked his brother that felt overboard I mean you want to avenge someone then do it but don't stoop to his/her level.. Several times are got annoyed by his character although its a good character I love him but sometimes the way he acts around a lot of people feels top bossy as though he can't humble himself, I felt that at least around the xiao brothers you will try and make there be a reasonable competition but I feel you made him too superior. Another time I didn't enjoy was also when he went to the yang house and decided to play a game with the uncle just because of his statement it felt overboard. I know we are not perfect but I wrote that so you'll look closely into that aspect next time, I hope you see this and also hope that I'd you see this you acknowledge it, I love this book. I'll definitely come back to give a good review about this book when I'm done , thanks for reading and for your patience.
I love the story development but towards the end it was rushed It gave me the feeling like I'm dumping it.i would have to no how the other characters ended did they get married ? what about the other family and grandpa
I’ve read a lot of novel with similar storyline. But honestly this one was jusy okay overall for me. It wasn’t mind blow or anything...just okay. The translation would need some work. Characters were getting mixed up a lot. From my point of view I rather the author just use one name instead of going back and forth between Tang Xi and Xiao Ruoruo. And it was sorta annoying how “clueless” the FL can be...I get it she want to be independent and be strong and take revenge on her own....but honestly I rather have her relied on her family and the ML for help since at time she can be a little stupid. Then there’s the ML he’s also okay...his character didn’t wow me like how other ML did in other novels. And also the guy is way too possessive for my liking. I know he lost her once andnis scares to lose her again...but relax dude. Anyways...overall the novel is decent and honestly a really quick read.
This is the first book that I find so disappointing. The story was good, and quite interesting but the ending is a huge disappointment. It is just so devastating that the initial good impression I have of the book just can't make up for it. The abrupt ending with so much questions left unanswered. I feel cheated. I really don't recommend this book.
it really interesting story about rebirth and revenge😍😍😍 it's really fun to read this all characters have their own charm 🥳🥳 this is really the best it didn't disappoint my expectation
nice story love to read it waiting for more stories Nd wanting hero Nd heroin to fall in love with each other immensely Nd irrevocably Nd want baddies to be punished
Short sweet story.loved it's writing editing .author did a good job not that regular rebirth story but insteresting story with fast pace.every character had its own space n importance.waiting for another book from author plssssssssss pretty plsssss
I read this book and wasnt sure what to expect, but once I was into chapter 2, i knew that I couldnt stop reading it. I really enjoyed how the female lead was like ok so my real family dont want me, Il make them regret, i love her uncles family who eventually bcame dad, mom and her brothers who spoiled her like crazy😁😁😁😍😍💕 and they r so understanding, as for male lead i 💖💖💖💖♥️😍💕💖 how shameless and devoted he is to the Female lead, he really didnt care of her brothers who were like no ur not gona marry our sister, he was like haha its not up to u. and then he when the female lead was like sorry cant see u 2n8 have dinner plans with my granddad. The male lead was like mum lets go visit ur dear friend as I need to see the female lead♥️♥️♥️😍😍😍 but yes this book is gr8 and i am still reading♥️♥️♥️💜🤩🥰😍
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I am in love with this novel!❤️ Although a bit cliche, the plot is exciting and intrguing! Very addictive! especially her 4 brothers! they protect her and always got her back! I would like to see the reactions of her dog biological parents once she reach the apex of success!
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So gotta first say that I finished the story and at the beginning was nice. The usual reincarnation type with system isn't bad....although the system wasn't much in the story compared to other stories. I more or less liked the characters. There were funny moments that helped ease the story. It was also not a long novel which isn't a bad thing. Now the bad part. For whatever reason, the story seemed to have rushed halfway through the story. It didn't explain that mysterious "backer" or why they did what they did nor the existence of the system or WHY the MC was chosen. It started fine but ended rushed with way too many places missing in the story. Ultimately, It needs to be fleshed out more.
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I had been in love with the story from the very first chapter. however the ending ruined it completely for me. The pacing in the last ten or so chapters is very clearly rushed.
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This story is amazing and unique. I am so hooked on the characters. I love the plot and everything about this book. I would like to Inform you that NovelStar is having a competition, you might want to join. https://author.starlight.ink/essay/index.html
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I really like this book. Reincarnation? Yes. True love? 100% Revenge? Please! Face slapping? YES! Family? Gotta love it! Happily Ever after? Thank god
I love this novel, and it is a worth it to read it. I don't mind the so called "racism" because I focus myself to the plot of the story. I think, those who think that this novel is not good please let your heart and mind open because the novel never stated to discriminate other culture or race right? give this novel a try. Thank you!
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When I read some of the comments, I thought the novel might not be authentic enough and would rather be a copy of other novels. Thankfully I gave this novel a chance as other comments said it was worth your while, because it definitely is! I think the story is original, funny and well written. Although I’m at chapter 55 now, I definitely recommend reading this novel!
I quite like this novel. I never like much story abt system because I have try read several story with this route, but this one is good! Although sometimes I feel the system didn't need in this story, transmigration modern-modern (reborn) is enough. This is quite fast story, at first I'm shock because the secret abt her still alive can be known to others too early. So, after that surprise thorough story I can calm down and enjoy it. Well, people isn't perfect so every character have made mistake inc ML FL... But OK TangXi/XiaoRou is awesome girl/woman 😍 superb, but one thing is I dislike how weak her body is till almost at end suddenly strong because of that point. I guess this story deserved more longer chapter (+200-400 #atleast below 1000 chapter, 543 chapters isn't enough --> many unanswered questions). Long Qiao Group & Long Qiao Organization is lead with same person but ok did Long Organization is terrorist or not? Unclear .... I wish to know more abt ML *Qiao Liang* - flashbacks during his childhood, how they meet & survive on that hell island. Up 400 chapters everything seems more rushing, many cp in this story that should be highlight more since the author write abt them... Ofc many more things I wish to list tho. I'm glad LuLi is fine at the end tho... But during their wedding, I'm sure it's hard to list every important character - side/support role but I'm miss Chu Ling, didn't mention abt him at all. Well I love her 3 brothers Xiao 💖 but I wish Yao have more scene, her mommy and daddy is sweetest parents I luv them! This novel have a lot good things to explored more, so if the author make an season 2 for this story I'm surely read!
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I like dis story ..nice plot and superb loving family towards fl and ml and fl both deja vu.. I completed it wanna read more this type entertaining...
I am not done with the book yet but I've read over 50% of it, ur creativity is nice , the idea is also nice, immediately I started Reading I loved the book instantly but as time went on .... I figured you had given the main male character too much speciality as tho he was perfect, although we all know he struggled but there were some parts that felt too annoying to read (for me idk about others ) like when he fought with yao I felt you should have made yao beat him so we'll all know it wasn't a typical "cliche" or when he kicked his brother that felt overboard I mean you want to avenge someone then do it but don't stoop to his/her level.. Several times are got annoyed by his character although its a good character I love him but sometimes the way he acts around a lot of people feels top bossy as though he can't humble himself, I felt that at least around the xiao brothers you will try and make there be a reasonable competition but I feel you made him too superior. Another time I didn't enjoy was also when he went to the yang house and decided to play a game with the uncle just because of his statement it felt overboard. I know we are not perfect but I wrote that so you'll look closely into that aspect next time, I hope you see this and also hope that I'd you see this you acknowledge it, I love this book. I'll definitely come back to give a good review about this book when I'm done , thanks for reading and for your patience.
I love the story development but towards the end it was rushed It gave me the feeling like I'm dumping it.i would have to no how the other characters ended did they get married ? what about the other family and grandpa
I’ve read a lot of novel with similar storyline. But honestly this one was jusy okay overall for me. It wasn’t mind blow or anything...just okay. The translation would need some work. Characters were getting mixed up a lot. From my point of view I rather the author just use one name instead of going back and forth between Tang Xi and Xiao Ruoruo. And it was sorta annoying how “clueless” the FL can be...I get it she want to be independent and be strong and take revenge on her own....but honestly I rather have her relied on her family and the ML for help since at time she can be a little stupid. Then there’s the ML he’s also okay...his character didn’t wow me like how other ML did in other novels. And also the guy is way too possessive for my liking. I know he lost her once andnis scares to lose her again...but relax dude. Anyways...overall the novel is decent and honestly a really quick read.
This is the first book that I find so disappointing. The story was good, and quite interesting but the ending is a huge disappointment. It is just so devastating that the initial good impression I have of the book just can't make up for it. The abrupt ending with so much questions left unanswered. I feel cheated. I really don't recommend this book.
it really interesting story about rebirth and revenge😍😍😍 it's really fun to read this all characters have their own charm 🥳🥳 this is really the best it didn't disappoint my expectation
nice story love to read it waiting for more stories Nd wanting hero Nd heroin to fall in love with each other immensely Nd irrevocably Nd want baddies to be punished
Short sweet story.loved it's writing editing .author did a good job not that regular rebirth story but insteresting story with fast pace.every character had its own space n importance.waiting for another book from author plssssssssss pretty plsssss
I read this book and wasnt sure what to expect, but once I was into chapter 2, i knew that I couldnt stop reading it. I really enjoyed how the female lead was like ok so my real family dont want me, Il make them regret, i love her uncles family who eventually bcame dad, mom and her brothers who spoiled her like crazy😁😁😁😍😍💕 and they r so understanding, as for male lead i 💖💖💖💖♥️😍💕💖 how shameless and devoted he is to the Female lead, he really didnt care of her brothers who were like no ur not gona marry our sister, he was like haha its not up to u. and then he when the female lead was like sorry cant see u 2n8 have dinner plans with my granddad. The male lead was like mum lets go visit ur dear friend as I need to see the female lead♥️♥️♥️😍😍😍 but yes this book is gr8 and i am still reading♥️♥️♥️💜🤩🥰😍
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I am in love with this novel!❤️ Although a bit cliche, the plot is exciting and intrguing! Very addictive! especially her 4 brothers! they protect her and always got her back! I would like to see the reactions of her dog biological parents once she reach the apex of success!
Am in love with this story......😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
So gotta first say that I finished the story and at the beginning was nice. The usual reincarnation type with system isn't bad....although the system wasn't much in the story compared to other stories. I more or less liked the characters. There were funny moments that helped ease the story. It was also not a long novel which isn't a bad thing. Now the bad part. For whatever reason, the story seemed to have rushed halfway through the story. It didn't explain that mysterious "backer" or why they did what they did nor the existence of the system or WHY the MC was chosen. It started fine but ended rushed with way too many places missing in the story. Ultimately, It needs to be fleshed out more.
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I had been in love with the story from the very first chapter. however the ending ruined it completely for me. The pacing in the last ten or so chapters is very clearly rushed.
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