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I liked the boook but some part of that book doesn't allow me to give full ratings. I am also not able to tell what's wrong here. Please take it positively author.
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It's been one hell of a novel so far. Can't wait for new updates. Kudos to the writer for this masterpiece. I can't get enough of this novel. I hope the writer will continue to give steady updates on it.
Definitely a book for those who like the darker side of humans. Recommend no one under 18 should read. I really like the fact that he, the victim, is hearing and seeing her...
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I thought the book was amazing the start was ****ed up and a sick sick individual torturing a man. With a lot of ****ed up **** happening like a tool bring stucked up a mans penis. A lot of ****ed up **** happens I recommend this to a person who enjoys a good ass horror movie and. This book is a little like the movie saw with out the traps a sick person
This first Nine chapters are captivating, if to donate Power Stones will help to release more chapters, then tell us how many power stones is needed and we will raise it..
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The misery of the girl setting trap, tormenting and rapping a male is shocking and unimaginable. The horror aspect of this story makes it a continuous reading, one chapter after the other chapter. It is very unfortunate that it was just nine chapters.
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Not so good translation Need more efforts Characters are nice but need more improvisation Looking forward for the update Thanks for the update.
ネタバレを明かす It was good so far. Hope you would keep up the good work. Suspense & horror was there till now. Do continue the same. Character we're design well.
Since its a dark theme novel. Its pretty much lacking in the aspect. Need to work on how the story is written. If written in terms of BDSM its lacking too much.
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Bad story no update poor development and the other side of the time I yelled out of it and it is a great weekend and we will be a little bit more of a new job going on a date for my birthday and she was like I said that she is so good to hear about your mom and I was just a bit of a good day today so I don't want to end up in my life and
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So what are you doing now? The original plan was to make sure you are not going to the hospital with a little bit more than a week and then you can see the movie and then you will have to go back to the gym now and again in the middle of the day before the end of the story
All of the immortal technique is the only way to the world to be in a few minutes late and you can do it again soon as possible i would appreciate it if you want to go back to the world will be there in a few minutes to spare time and where are we going to be in a few weeks
Reading this is so exciting i really love the author i love the characters.This really a good story ghat ive read the plot the events its so nice hope the author can give more story for the readers thanks.
Best novel I've ever read .............. please post next chapter soon I'm eagerly waiting ...................... for what would happen ahead please post next chapters soon I'm hoping that it's not the end i want something more in the end some thrill some more darkness.......by d way wonderfull novel👌👌..................💯💯
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The story is good but i think the next chapter is gone too far.. Maybe i stop reading it.. Eventhough the story is quite good and interesting..
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I liked the boook but some part of that book doesn't allow me to give full ratings. I am also not able to tell what's wrong here. Please take it positively author.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact geekyteddyyo@gmail.com. A brief introduction, some sample charpters or links will be appriciated when reaching out.
It's been one hell of a novel so far. Can't wait for new updates. Kudos to the writer for this masterpiece. I can't get enough of this novel. I hope the writer will continue to give steady updates on it.
Definitely a book for those who like the darker side of humans. Recommend no one under 18 should read. I really like the fact that he, the victim, is hearing and seeing her...
ネタバレを明かす I thought the book was amazing the start was ****ed up and a sick sick individual torturing a man. With a lot of ****ed up **** happening like a tool bring stucked up a mans penis. A lot of ****ed up **** happens I recommend this to a person who enjoys a good ass horror movie and. This book is a little like the movie saw with out the traps a sick person
This first Nine chapters are captivating, if to donate Power Stones will help to release more chapters, then tell us how many power stones is needed and we will raise it..
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The misery of the girl setting trap, tormenting and rapping a male is shocking and unimaginable. The horror aspect of this story makes it a continuous reading, one chapter after the other chapter. It is very unfortunate that it was just nine chapters.
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Not so good translation Need more efforts Characters are nice but need more improvisation Looking forward for the update Thanks for the update.
ネタバレを明かす It was good so far. Hope you would keep up the good work. Suspense & horror was there till now. Do continue the same. Character we're design well.
Since its a dark theme novel. Its pretty much lacking in the aspect. Need to work on how the story is written. If written in terms of BDSM its lacking too much.
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The Story Line Is amazing , exciting and senseous. Can't wait to read the entire amazing story! Alex has jus grabbed my heart!!!! How to wish to see these characters in real life than reel life!!! I always wanted to look like Melanie .... The story has an amazing touch base
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Bad story no update poor development and the other side of the time I yelled out of it and it is a great weekend and we will be a little bit more of a new job going on a date for my birthday and she was like I said that she is so good to hear about your mom and I was just a bit of a good day today so I don't want to end up in my life and
All info c CNN do that again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and again and toy
Will in FBI Zayn ICU sound cumin chunk so zoo stop allweep allXML all will cub which chick shock chubby buck bunch him and his wife was the club Cobb Chicano to the gym today cause of the time being with someone
All XML will all TV in pm pm ex TV in on addiction Sioux Quincy doc App willdo curb into six doc Styx in do zoozoo stop so do cop stop do zoodo so dogo go FYI go FYI go by hi xxxii hi go hi go go hi hi go hi hi hi hi hi hi FYI go go hi hi hi h hi up ihu knob Silvio so XML all
So what are you doing now? The original plan was to make sure you are not going to the hospital with a little bit more than a week and then you can see the movie and then you will have to go back to the gym now and again in the middle of the day before the end of the story
All of the immortal technique is the only way to the world to be in a few minutes late and you can do it again soon as possible i would appreciate it if you want to go back to the world will be there in a few minutes to spare time and where are we going to be in a few weeks
Reading this is so exciting i really love the author i love the characters.This really a good story ghat ive read the plot the events its so nice hope the author can give more story for the readers thanks.
Best novel I've ever read .............. please post next chapter soon I'm eagerly waiting ...................... for what would happen ahead please post next chapters soon I'm hoping that it's not the end i want something more in the end some thrill some more darkness.......by d way wonderfull novel👌👌..................💯💯
ネタバレを明かす The story is good but i think the next chapter is gone too far.. Maybe i stop reading it.. Eventhough the story is quite good and interesting..
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