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I like this story very much .that i cant wait to unlock another chapter thanks for writing this kind of story .i made me think not to trust anybody with outside appearance bcoz theres a beast hiding on it.
This novel is soooooooooooooooooooo...gooooooooooodddd...i realy injoyed it...the characters were well formed ...i injoyed the way the auther described the setustions...it was pretty intense though.. looking forward to see next chapter...plzz upload soon...🙋
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Sooooo hot. It's making so much sense. Making the reader soooo horny. A combination of sexy and terrifying. I like the way the dead girl is haunting his *** life. She must be particularly very jealous Very hot
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superb thriller story..holding from starting..u can feel the pace and the secret keeps ur interest on. you never loose your interest till the end..keep readibg very good thriller secret story
Oooooooooo...mmy god!! This novel is super nice..👯💓💓💓💓....i will definitely recommend this to others........i really enjoyed this novel...
I really enjoyed this novel ...the characters were amazing... The story is amazing....👌👌👌👌.... I m really looking forward to the next chapter for this novel.... Best novel ..
Omg !!!...this soo far the best novel I've ever read 😍😍...this novel can make a man gard and a women wet 🤭🤭...i rely want to read the next chapter... I would definitely recommend this to everyone...
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I was waiting and yet the author seems to forget us. Whatever he/she should be atleast be in the middle if he wants it to be on the top or he wants to have money through it. It is just sooo annoying anyways 9 chapters I can still move on easilyy..
I like the story since I am into a thriller story.. but this story made me hot though like I wanna go home and have a rough f***ing session with my Love. Well anyways.. I can't understand myself Why I love the part where He **** Melanie's dead body😂.. The story is my liking so Even if I will buy stone for it til I finish reading. Thank you author.
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It's okay, sometimes I feel like the readers don't really think the author knows what they are writing. On a scale of 1 to 10, with one being very low writing quality, ten being perfect ur somewhere near it, I would say this novel is a 6 or 7... or somewhere around there
I love how the story goes. I can't stop reading until the last chapter. Indeed a good story and update ASAP. Can't wait how this story will end and how the main character resolve the issue about Melanie's Ghost!Good job Author!
Wow. I don’t think I’ve ever read anything quite like this (grammar wise). There’s unnecessary description everywhere and broken sentences that force me to reread half of what you are trying to say. The premise is at least somewhat interesting (which is why it’s not completely hopeless), but other than that... If you invest in an editor, I’ll reread and reconsider my score, but for now, I’ll pass on this one. No shame to those who read and enjoy this novel, but there’s a certain quality of writing I expect when I’m reading. Hope this was good constructive criticism.
Can you please offer stories without break 😣😣😌😌😌😌😌😌😓😓😓😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒want to read stories without breaks !!!!!!!!!!!! 1.2.3.4.5.6
😂😏😁😂😂😂😏😏😏🙄🙄🙄🙄where is the horror ????.... M waiting to read further more to gather in with this story easily 😂😁🙄😏🙄🙄🤔🤔🤔🤔
Wow I really loved this book.😂 Who els was turned on by this . Because damn . Its a good book so far . When will the next chapter be released I'm curious Who other than me is turned on by blood ?
its awesome !! the story is too good i loved it though its my first time reading a horror one and i think i did right thing to choose this as my first one
Thats amazing story but lack some amazement.....it dont stand on as its version horror.if the story will include d some scary scenes rather than these fucking scenes it will be more scary so why don't you try something more interesting and specific but it was interesting to know about the rape of young men as we belong to the world where only woman get raped
Detailed, arousing one's curiosity, keeps me hanging and expecting what happens next.mind boggling as it keeps me guessing where the story is leading.
It can actually compared to drug. N m feeling like an drug addict...no new chapter Wt happen. Next. Story development is so much better. However few character s are involved still...strong grip. Fantasy which make u feel pain
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Update..he is going crazy.The new girl at the restaurant is actually nice but Alex is fucking up.. And the book is actually nice.. What made her to be fucking and torturing men.. Especially innocent men who wants to be in a relationship with her.. What happened in her past?
To have in this story the only good thing are the erotic rare scenes, some are SDM (sadomasochistic) and in the others, the boy remembers the girl who tortured him, the rest is too unreal, I already explain it in the comments of each chapter I read and since it is too long, I will copy the comments and I will put the number of the chapter, ahh and another good thing is the design of characters, first we have the protagonist where his life ends up being a piece of **** plus mental disorders, the crazy girl (Melanie), he friend of the protagonist which leads to misfortune and a new girl who wants to **** the protagonist knowing only for a day xd. Now the chapters: Capitulo 1 You seriously think that this is scary, haha; and please, seriously you think that the candle will hurt so that one shouts, hahahaha, and the guy is masochistic, at least in the first chapter, this is PURE AND HARD SADOMASOCHI** Chapter 2 Seriously the most intelligent detective is believed under the skies and is guided by a fucking book, just for this, he deserves everything that is happening to him and I keep saying that this guy is a masochist. And I keep saying that this is not horror and suspense, because only seeing the chapter, I know what will happen next, and as a gift, instead of giving me fear, I am amused by what is happening to this guy. Chapter 3 This chapter has seemed funny to me, since the mc is a poor masochistic soul, he knows that they are going to kill him, but even so in his mind he only thinks about ***, how does this guy brain work alone with apples? What else is highlighted in this chapter are mainly the flashbacks between the dialogues, the rest is trash until now. Chapter 4 Oh no poor man, now the only thing that I hope in the next chapters is that they sodomize hahahah, I smell it, so we emit the horror and supplant it eroticism SDM, the suspense throw it out the window and replace it with how unfortunate life of mc is in comparison to our life hahaha. Chapter 5 This chapter has been darker than the previous one, but I emphasize only for men, because if a woman reads this, she just shrugs and says next, this girl is crazy, I guess he found out that the one who killed his dad when he discovered his identity when he arrives in the city , because if he has made a plan to bring it and everything, it would be too farfetched and already very done, that is boring and very intuitive. Chapter 6 The part where he goes crazy, is abrupt, but believable since he was tortured, but when you told me that he had not been fed for two days, the unrealism went through the roof, we had a recount of what happened from the first chapter, the protagonist at the beginning had energy even to scream, also wanted to escape and finally he could joke, I mean, that his fatigue was not so much (mentally and physically), but now in chapter six, we find that a he has been tortured physically and mentally since he was proud and not eaten in two days, this guy should not even be able to talk and less scream, the only thing that can save him, is arguing that when he killed this crazy girl, he had an exaggerated adrenaline rush (god level), so much that he could use his full strength, in addition to moving the waist at the same time hahaha. Ahh Finally this novel is not dark, it is an erotic SDM and the one that says otherwise is a pussy. Chapter 7 Hahaha like an eagle, this is too funny, or please, in a second I recover your mental capacity, I mean, the physical and mental torture with the solo works for 10 minutes and then it becomes immune like in a game. And then it becomes unstable again and hits a cadaver hahah, I think it became a "little" mentally unstable, this is the only thing and I do not understand why they did not do psychological tests, since they always do them in these types of cases, but I remember that this story never made sense and it passed me. **: MC is a closet masochist. Chapter 8 Ohh ****, this guy's love transcends the heavens, seriously, I guess it would happen if this guy gets his horns, he sure commits suicide, having the girl torture him, humiliation, contempt and the guy still said he loved her , although first he said that he hated her, this is confusing, well, it is the mentality of the mc, I still believe that it is better than this in a hospital for the mentally ill. And for the rest, 1 can serve to develop a character or 2 to give more misfortunes, which is the only thing I've read since I started this and I'm not complaining as I find everything that happens funny. Chapter 9 Well I guess the protagonist has the frégoli mental disorder, that's horrible, because he's going to see people where you are not, and also he also hears voices in his head, what a sad life he leads, well, I hope you upload another chapter since the life of this guy is sad that even I laugh and not because it is bad, but because when I saw this novel, I read the reviews, said it was a dark story and was well done, but when I entered, I gave a lot Laughter, everything was too unreal and the guy was too stupid and had power up in rare moments hahaha. And I already knew what was going to happen before you wrote it, it was too intuitive.And seriously you're going to launch a book of this in amazon, ohhh this is too good, do it you have all my support hahaha.
Is that the end? I think it need a lot more chapters... What happened to Alex.. Does he overcome her fears? Does he found her love life... A lot of questions to ask.
The story was good but why you didnt update the story yet? Its kind of frustrating that the story was left hanging. I need to know what happen to the guy with his new girl. I just make assumptions that the guy turn into a killer or some kind of psychopath or split identity where he didnt know or realise he kill girls
Wow I really loved this book.😂 Who els was turned on by this . Because damn . Its a good book so far . When will the next chapter be released I'm curious Who other than me is turned on by blood ?
Author...you are great at making scary story...but for me,not to scary..more like a detective trying to find his life...the truth of his reason why...I'm still waiting for your next novel to be publish..as a promise...I will keep donating the gems to you...so you can continue your stunning story...not just me..to all of the reader.. P.S. Hope to see the next story quick as possible
Just like the title it's ******** extreme ***, no foreplay no fancy words, no lovey dovey scene. It's twisted and sadistic, full of agony and misery, if you like these kind of genres then you probably would love this book. It's not for the feeble minded or underage ( please if you are under 17 DO NOT READ!!! ) Am still expecting updates and better development of the ML
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I like this story very much .that i cant wait to unlock another chapter thanks for writing this kind of story .i made me think not to trust anybody with outside appearance bcoz theres a beast hiding on it.
This novel is soooooooooooooooooooo...gooooooooooodddd...i realy injoyed it...the characters were well formed ...i injoyed the way the auther described the setustions...it was pretty intense though.. looking forward to see next chapter...plzz upload soon...🙋
ネタバレを明かす Sooooo hot. It's making so much sense. Making the reader soooo horny. A combination of sexy and terrifying. I like the way the dead girl is haunting his *** life. She must be particularly very jealous Very hot
Hhdme r r r wh r sve sc esg DHS fvdhsbs ur ur yez r urxyzyr dydhesye ya eyd3xy ray zyra zy at. y yw yw yw yw ys y dyydvdgeh sun shdmwhrne stud eysbd s shenbegsnehsh fysns game syjenejehebe scene ehdjd dyejjendgdb Sydney d HD sh dhd end DHS udve s
superb thriller story..holding from starting..u can feel the pace and the secret keeps ur interest on. you never loose your interest till the end..keep readibg very good thriller secret story
Oooooooooo...mmy god!! This novel is super nice..👯💓💓💓💓....i will definitely recommend this to others........i really enjoyed this novel...
I really enjoyed this novel ...the characters were amazing... The story is amazing....👌👌👌👌.... I m really looking forward to the next chapter for this novel.... Best novel ..
Omg !!!...this soo far the best novel I've ever read 😍😍...this novel can make a man gard and a women wet 🤭🤭...i rely want to read the next chapter... I would definitely recommend this to everyone...
ネタバレを明かす I was waiting and yet the author seems to forget us. Whatever he/she should be atleast be in the middle if he wants it to be on the top or he wants to have money through it. It is just sooo annoying anyways 9 chapters I can still move on easilyy..
I like the story since I am into a thriller story.. but this story made me hot though like I wanna go home and have a rough f***ing session with my Love. Well anyways.. I can't understand myself Why I love the part where He **** Melanie's dead body😂.. The story is my liking so Even if I will buy stone for it til I finish reading. Thank you author.
ネタバレを明かす It's okay, sometimes I feel like the readers don't really think the author knows what they are writing. On a scale of 1 to 10, with one being very low writing quality, ten being perfect ur somewhere near it, I would say this novel is a 6 or 7... or somewhere around there
I love how the story goes. I can't stop reading until the last chapter. Indeed a good story and update ASAP. Can't wait how this story will end and how the main character resolve the issue about Melanie's Ghost!Good job Author!
Wow. I don’t think I’ve ever read anything quite like this (grammar wise). There’s unnecessary description everywhere and broken sentences that force me to reread half of what you are trying to say. The premise is at least somewhat interesting (which is why it’s not completely hopeless), but other than that... If you invest in an editor, I’ll reread and reconsider my score, but for now, I’ll pass on this one. No shame to those who read and enjoy this novel, but there’s a certain quality of writing I expect when I’m reading. Hope this was good constructive criticism.
Can you please offer stories without break 😣😣😌😌😌😌😌😌😓😓😓😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒want to read stories without breaks !!!!!!!!!!!! 1.2.3.4.5.6
😂😏😁😂😂😂😏😏😏🙄🙄🙄🙄where is the horror ????.... M waiting to read further more to gather in with this story easily 😂😁🙄😏🙄🙄🤔🤔🤔🤔
Wow I really loved this book.😂 Who els was turned on by this . Because damn . Its a good book so far . When will the next chapter be released I'm curious Who other than me is turned on by blood ?
its awesome !! the story is too good i loved it though its my first time reading a horror one and i think i did right thing to choose this as my first one
Thats amazing story but lack some amazement.....it dont stand on as its version horror.if the story will include d some scary scenes rather than these fucking scenes it will be more scary so why don't you try something more interesting and specific but it was interesting to know about the rape of young men as we belong to the world where only woman get raped
Detailed, arousing one's curiosity, keeps me hanging and expecting what happens next.mind boggling as it keeps me guessing where the story is leading.
It can actually compared to drug. N m feeling like an drug addict...no new chapter Wt happen. Next. Story development is so much better. However few character s are involved still...strong grip. Fantasy which make u feel pain
ネタバレを明かす Update..he is going crazy.The new girl at the restaurant is actually nice but Alex is fucking up.. And the book is actually nice.. What made her to be fucking and torturing men.. Especially innocent men who wants to be in a relationship with her.. What happened in her past?
To have in this story the only good thing are the erotic rare scenes, some are SDM (sadomasochistic) and in the others, the boy remembers the girl who tortured him, the rest is too unreal, I already explain it in the comments of each chapter I read and since it is too long, I will copy the comments and I will put the number of the chapter, ahh and another good thing is the design of characters, first we have the protagonist where his life ends up being a piece of **** plus mental disorders, the crazy girl (Melanie), he friend of the protagonist which leads to misfortune and a new girl who wants to **** the protagonist knowing only for a day xd. Now the chapters: Capitulo 1 You seriously think that this is scary, haha; and please, seriously you think that the candle will hurt so that one shouts, hahahaha, and the guy is masochistic, at least in the first chapter, this is PURE AND HARD SADOMASOCHI** Chapter 2 Seriously the most intelligent detective is believed under the skies and is guided by a fucking book, just for this, he deserves everything that is happening to him and I keep saying that this guy is a masochist. And I keep saying that this is not horror and suspense, because only seeing the chapter, I know what will happen next, and as a gift, instead of giving me fear, I am amused by what is happening to this guy. Chapter 3 This chapter has seemed funny to me, since the mc is a poor masochistic soul, he knows that they are going to kill him, but even so in his mind he only thinks about ***, how does this guy brain work alone with apples? What else is highlighted in this chapter are mainly the flashbacks between the dialogues, the rest is trash until now. Chapter 4 Oh no poor man, now the only thing that I hope in the next chapters is that they sodomize hahahah, I smell it, so we emit the horror and supplant it eroticism SDM, the suspense throw it out the window and replace it with how unfortunate life of mc is in comparison to our life hahaha. Chapter 5 This chapter has been darker than the previous one, but I emphasize only for men, because if a woman reads this, she just shrugs and says next, this girl is crazy, I guess he found out that the one who killed his dad when he discovered his identity when he arrives in the city , because if he has made a plan to bring it and everything, it would be too farfetched and already very done, that is boring and very intuitive. Chapter 6 The part where he goes crazy, is abrupt, but believable since he was tortured, but when you told me that he had not been fed for two days, the unrealism went through the roof, we had a recount of what happened from the first chapter, the protagonist at the beginning had energy even to scream, also wanted to escape and finally he could joke, I mean, that his fatigue was not so much (mentally and physically), but now in chapter six, we find that a he has been tortured physically and mentally since he was proud and not eaten in two days, this guy should not even be able to talk and less scream, the only thing that can save him, is arguing that when he killed this crazy girl, he had an exaggerated adrenaline rush (god level), so much that he could use his full strength, in addition to moving the waist at the same time hahaha. Ahh Finally this novel is not dark, it is an erotic SDM and the one that says otherwise is a pussy. Chapter 7 Hahaha like an eagle, this is too funny, or please, in a second I recover your mental capacity, I mean, the physical and mental torture with the solo works for 10 minutes and then it becomes immune like in a game. And then it becomes unstable again and hits a cadaver hahah, I think it became a "little" mentally unstable, this is the only thing and I do not understand why they did not do psychological tests, since they always do them in these types of cases, but I remember that this story never made sense and it passed me. **: MC is a closet masochist. Chapter 8 Ohh ****, this guy's love transcends the heavens, seriously, I guess it would happen if this guy gets his horns, he sure commits suicide, having the girl torture him, humiliation, contempt and the guy still said he loved her , although first he said that he hated her, this is confusing, well, it is the mentality of the mc, I still believe that it is better than this in a hospital for the mentally ill. And for the rest, 1 can serve to develop a character or 2 to give more misfortunes, which is the only thing I've read since I started this and I'm not complaining as I find everything that happens funny. Chapter 9 Well I guess the protagonist has the frégoli mental disorder, that's horrible, because he's going to see people where you are not, and also he also hears voices in his head, what a sad life he leads, well, I hope you upload another chapter since the life of this guy is sad that even I laugh and not because it is bad, but because when I saw this novel, I read the reviews, said it was a dark story and was well done, but when I entered, I gave a lot Laughter, everything was too unreal and the guy was too stupid and had power up in rare moments hahaha. And I already knew what was going to happen before you wrote it, it was too intuitive.And seriously you're going to launch a book of this in amazon, ohhh this is too good, do it you have all my support hahaha.
Is that the end? I think it need a lot more chapters... What happened to Alex.. Does he overcome her fears? Does he found her love life... A lot of questions to ask.
The story was good but why you didnt update the story yet? Its kind of frustrating that the story was left hanging. I need to know what happen to the guy with his new girl. I just make assumptions that the guy turn into a killer or some kind of psychopath or split identity where he didnt know or realise he kill girls
Wow I really loved this book.😂 Who els was turned on by this . Because damn . Its a good book so far . When will the next chapter be released I'm curious Who other than me is turned on by blood ?
Author...you are great at making scary story...but for me,not to scary..more like a detective trying to find his life...the truth of his reason why...I'm still waiting for your next novel to be publish..as a promise...I will keep donating the gems to you...so you can continue your stunning story...not just me..to all of the reader.. P.S. Hope to see the next story quick as possible
Just like the title it's ******** extreme ***, no foreplay no fancy words, no lovey dovey scene. It's twisted and sadistic, full of agony and misery, if you like these kind of genres then you probably would love this book. It's not for the feeble minded or underage ( please if you are under 17 DO NOT READ!!! ) Am still expecting updates and better development of the ML
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