One Piece Troublemaker

LV 5

srVlad

ohhhh heck.... I'm seeing the MC coming up like a boss in execution the ACE on Marine QG.... ACE was about to be crossed by the handle of the scarlet caterpillar when a fucking death god appears and cut it in 2 parts... so, when the entire world be quiet, a voice that reaches the depths of souls said: -Im not lf problems, but.... WHERE DID YOU ARRANGE COURAGE TO DARE TO KILL THE SON OF MY CAPTAIN? Like the apocalipse, all minds of the audience come back and the world became a caotic and crazy place.... So, like the hades himself, the MC look at garp and said with an evident killing intent: -U are the most rival of him? I dont think so, a man who choice your own principles about your family dont deserves my respect. -The glorious marine wanna fight???? The wonderful marine pretend be the winner, again, in this show? I would like to see hoooo***ww!!!!! When the MC said that, the QG Marine got dark..... in the last moments, a show who nobody can forget was engraved on your memories....... In a island, watching this moment, was a old man with tears in ur eyes saying: he dont forgot ur promise, my captain... tomorrow start a new era!!!!!!

LV 6

Takskakashi

I give 5 to this novel because of the way this novel plot is made. The plot is not boring at all and is light to read. I think the most part I did like on this novel is by integrating the real characters and creating new characters similar to what we have probably wish at the One Piece World. Please keep the chapters coming and enjoy writing

LV 5

UndeadSage

IN A NUT: Due to twist of events MC is reborn in the world of Onepiece, with 5 wishes granted, only to join the legendary crew of the PIRATE KING!!! Review: Story is something to look forward to, unlike the grammar.. Although attempts are made by the author, you can only grasp about 75% from his work... Full comprehension is possible BUT A 'SMOOTH-RIDE' cannot be guaranteed... THANKS FOR THE CHAPTERS AND KEEP 'EM COMING!!!

LV 4

Eslyna

First official one star review I ever gave. Couldn't even read 2nd chapter. I'm guessing English isn't your first language, but I'm not giving u bonus points. Since your putting Phillopeno culture, u should out tags for things people wont understsnd. For one idk how the MC name is even pronounced correctly. You also did not edit your chaoters, and grammer / writing style bad (sry). Also its Hiatus making updste also a 0.

LV 3

MoonlightDew

More more more pls publish more chapter Sbsbshhsbsnsnsbdbdbdhdhdhshshgayawyeueiekdkxkxmxmmamamzmskskzkkskakskskwiwieidiahhagwvvsgsggzgxudijejsnbsvdvaffsusiekdkdndnbavgsgiekkdnbzkakksndbdidiowkebdbiziwkwks

LV 5

srVlad

another novel in hiato? disappointing. very disappointing. .... .... ... ... ... ... ... maybe a stop to read.... every novel than i like its stopped

LV 5

Sunlight08

Don't mind my review, it's just a way for me to apreciate this novel xD So author give me more chapter xD Jajajajajajajajajajajajajajajaja Jajajajajajajajajajajajajajajaja Jajajajajajajajajajajajajajajaja

LV 13

RoiRed

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LV 4

yuhyeenie

Hi there! I really love that you actually made the main character a filipino because I am also a Filipina... But I have to be honest with you about your novel. I hope you would not take this negatively because I would like to help you improve your writing skills because I was once like this back then... To be honest, I don't really get what you are trying to narrate in your novel and too many dialogues. You didn't balanced out the descriptive sentences and the dialogues... There are grammatical errors found in certain chapters and I hope you will edit it out sooner. Capitalization. You forgot to capitalize some letters in a sentence. Please add more descriptive sentences to let the readers know and get interested in what are you trying to convey in such story...

LV 4

DivineImperialGod

Well plagiarism??.....hmmmmmmm Don’t mind anything after this Ffghgghsjdjdhshshhdgagshehdueihsgdhshhdhshsgahksocpabwfsyhwvdhsjwbgdjwvsyanvdusbsgsjevsunwhdjwbdhwjudjsjdihdndospqkhsyatsbrlspauxbsyehnxlxishdvesyxhbsjwiwbaksl

LV 5

Evilkingjoker

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LV 6

InnerVoice

How the F can he survive in a world as dangerous as One Piece, a world filled with monsters and men worst than monsters when he got himself kill by domestic chicken? That makes no sense

LV 5

BlackIWhite

I will rate the writing quality 5/5 cause every chapters have enough words per chapter 5/5 for story development for original fanfic where he start with shanks 5/5 for characters design for adding some original characters 5/5 for world background cause I love one piece but 4/5 for stability updates cause it stopped updating all in all its good and thanks for your work

LV 14

Soupreme

Seeing that it is a fellow filipino’s novel, im already giving my support as it’s my first time seing this HAHAHAHA good luck and ill make sure to read every chapter!

LV 4

iamthor123

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