SilverTaurus88

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SilverTaurus88
SilverTaurus88
16 days ago
Posted

The story actually pretty good. The first half of the the story 5/5. The later part unfortunately is not as good as it started. The main issue the Author started to use too many POV, you are no longer feel who is the MC, because of this the story not as smooth as it was. Now it's too fragmented. I usually don't mind if we sometimes see the story from different perspective, but here this is no longer the case. Actually this is not a huge problem we are still early in the story and the Author can fix this. So i advice for everyone to give it a try, maybe when you are starting the Author already fix this POV issue.

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SilverTaurus88
SilverTaurus88
1 months ago
Commented

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SilverTaurus88
SilverTaurus88
1 months ago
Commented

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I am not the narrator here, but I'd like to give you a little filler before we continue with my passage to the underworld. I am Reo, a normal high school kid, but I've always had the worst luck possible. I sometimes feel like my bad luck has been intentional—maybe Lady Luck hated my guts for some reason.

SSS Ranked Reincarnation: Dark Dragon Legacy

SSS Ranked Reincarnation: Dark Dragon Legacy

Fantasy · DepressedMage

SilverTaurus88
SilverTaurus88
1 months ago
Commented

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SilverTaurus88
SilverTaurus88
1 months ago
Commented

19 chapter and so many stupid things, i have doubts if i should continue this story or not

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Although killing him would be easier, I knew nothing about the captain's abilities. At this point, I assumed that the captain was at least an E-rank power, so it wouldn't be impossible to smell the blood with his enhanced senses.

Transmigrating as an Extra Third-Rate Villain

Transmigrating as an Extra Third-Rate Villain

Fantasy · avbutt

SilverTaurus88
SilverTaurus88
1 months ago
Commented

After all it's logical to wait for the enemy to power up and forced to use full strength so your true opponent later can be prepared when facing against you.

In his previous fight, he wasn't even using up to 50% of his strength. But now maybe he can be forced to use his full strength.

Chaos Devourer System

Chaos Devourer System

Action · Supreme_IQ

SilverTaurus88
SilverTaurus88
1 months ago
Replied to Coco_420

But he has low intelligence... plus he became arrogant ( not that he has any reason to be proud, he already forgot where he started from)

"Fast, he's crazily fast," Dyvan said in shock as he grabbed his trident tightly in his hands, his gaze immediately changing to one of seriousness.

Chaos Devourer System

Chaos Devourer System

Action · Supreme_IQ

SilverTaurus88
SilverTaurus88
2 months ago
Replied to SirKimbel

Currently i am reading 2 novel in this website, one of them is this. I was unable to decide first on which one to buy privilige, but after considering everything i chose the other. I love this novel more than the other one, but unfortunately the stability of updates are tragic. Simple because of this is not worth it to me to buy privilige and spend my coins on this. I hope this will change in the future and Author pay more attention to this and release more ch. This is a great story so don't give up Author a lot of people love it, but you need to pay attention to the updates as well.

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