WRizz1

WRizz1

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A Guy Who wants to try writing

2024-03-10 Bergabung Germany
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1 days ago
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Please Review and drop Stones, so that I see your appreciation for my work. 😁

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2 days ago
Replied to Dark_PersonJJ

I haven't planned that far yet, so it's a maybe.

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3 days ago
Replied to xtansar

I do understand, but the problems weren’t as big and so the Grand Priest was able to solve them mostly, so that Caelix would get his chance to train.

The Grand Priest regarded him thoughtfully. "Your ambition is commendable, Caelix. However, the other universes are in chaos. I must focus my efforts on restoring balance. Return to me in ten years, and I will consider your request."

Dragon Ball: The First Destroyer [Hiatus for now]

Dragon Ball: The First Destroyer [Hiatus for now]

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3 days ago
Replied to xtansar

The trio has a very strong bond and their training along with their communication with each other makes it so their closeness is just right, or at least I believe so, however it is helpful to read how others see it, thanks for your comment.

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3 days ago
Replied to WRizz1

*Please do read on.*

He spent days studying the hybrid, exploring its unique combination of life and death magic. With time and effort, Harry began to extract some of its magical essence, incorporating it into his own body. His already impressive abilities became sharper, his endurance greater. His connection to death—enhanced by his experiences with Dementors—made him even more resistant to their influence.

Harry Potter: Toji Potter

Harry Potter: Toji Potter

Book&Literature · WRizz1

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3 days ago
Replied to Joana_Koci

Yeah, I know that my MC is sort of like a Gary Stu, But do keep in mind that this is one of my first works, don't judge me too hard for it, plus you're very early in the Story.

He spent days studying the hybrid, exploring its unique combination of life and death magic. With time and effort, Harry began to extract some of its magical essence, incorporating it into his own body. His already impressive abilities became sharper, his endurance greater. His connection to death—enhanced by his experiences with Dementors—made him even more resistant to their influence.

Harry Potter: Toji Potter

Harry Potter: Toji Potter

Book&Literature · WRizz1

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3 days ago
Replied to Joana_Koci

Sorry for writing it that way. I just had the idea that a relationship should start blossoming here, though I do see that Toji is acting a bit like a creep. Thank you for the comment, and I hope you enjoy the story as it goes on.

He had felt the growing admiration from Daphne, Hermione, and Tracey, and he knew he would have to address it. But the thought of settling down, even in a romantic sense, wasn't something that frightened him. If anything, it intrigued him. Why not date all three? They were smart, capable, and seemed to share his goals. He smirked to himself.

Harry Potter: Toji Potter

Harry Potter: Toji Potter

Book&Literature · WRizz1

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3 days ago
Replied to heartless1337

Correct, He did in fact never see him that small.

Toji raised his hands, staring at them. They were too small—pale, fragile, not the rough, battle-scarred hands he was used to. His body, too, was that of a child, far younger than Megumi had ever been.

Harry Potter: Toji Potter

Harry Potter: Toji Potter

Book&Literature · WRizz1

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3 days ago
Replied to Adriana7885

Hello Adriana7885, Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts. I appreciate your feedback and understand that the initial chapters might have given the impression of a typical harem fanfic. However, I want to assure you that there's much more depth and complexity to the story beyond the first few chapters. The relationships and character development are integral parts of the plot, but they don't define the entire narrative. I hope you'll consider reading further to see the broader themes and plotlines unfold. Your insights are valuable, and I'm always looking to improve. Best regards, Author

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5 days ago
Replied to Kuhn23

Yeah, the staff doesn't play too much of a role in this story anyway, I kinda tried it and then I sort of dropped it, just enjoy the read and hope you had a nice 2024, because 2025 will be better.

"And for the cores," Ollivander continued, "something as powerful as you will require ten cores: Dragon heartstring, Phoenix feather, Unicorn hair, a Griffon's feather, Mermaid scale, Basilisk fang soaked in poison, Kelpie hair, Nymph essence, Druid's essence, and the heart of a Fairy."

Harry Potter: Toji Potter

Harry Potter: Toji Potter

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