World background is excellent because characters have real problems. They feel even more real than in the original story. I can't say anything about writing quality (I'm not native English speaker), but I think that it is good. I didn't see grammar mistakes that would be too striking. Characters are explored in the way that you can feel their situation. They get stronger in a way possible for Naruto world, and it is not too fast nor too slow. I don't like that, Mc right now doesn't have a multi shadow clone jutsu. Pece of story development is good. (Of course, I would like to have more chapters to read, but I have time. I can wait.) Autor has nice idea about the personalities of characters and how to make them more interesting. Thank you, Mr. autor, for your work, and please continue it.
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World background is excellent because characters have real problems. They feel even more real than in the original story. I can't say anything about writing quality (I'm not native English speaker), but I think that it is good. I didn't see grammar mistakes that would be too striking. Characters are explored in the way that you can feel their situation. They get stronger in a way possible for Naruto world, and it is not too fast nor too slow. I don't like that, Mc right now doesn't have a multi shadow clone jutsu. Pece of story development is good. (Of course, I would like to have more chapters to read, but I have time. I can wait.) Autor has nice idea about the personalities of characters and how to make them more interesting. Thank you, Mr. autor, for your work, and please continue it.
The Cycle of Hatred: A Naruto Insert
Anime & Comics · Eternal_Yujin