Naruto: Starting in Naruto with Kekkei Genkai

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weeb_versus

Overall its really good but there somethings Im confused about. Theres a huge plothole around chakra. Its said he had a really small amount of chakra but he can apparently use shadow clones. Same with some jutsus, he uses them easily without running out and the issue is rarely addressed. I also hope that his relationships with his parents and naruto could be explained because for example, he invited naruto to his house and suddenly they are best friends, go to ichiraku all the time and his parents teach naruto everything they know easily, seems kinda unbelievable.

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behind_your_sister

author-san you need to understand that not anyone can get close to jinchuriki and train him & be friends with him....also you are following naruto like dog... this story is same as cannon but added MC that's it a shame it was good at first.................

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marcelll3214

This story in a word. SIMPLE. Bruh i was so bored readig this that i simply started thinking about work multiple times. Just isnt worth it. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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Ertirios

Who’s going to be the female lead? Hope it doesn’t take long to meet her [img=More pls]

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GodOfLight

Dude, I thought he would have a cool and unique kekkei genkai, but it turns out it’s just some kind of trash kekkei genkai, I thought it would be something unique, maybe I expected too much

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jackson_smith

MaD Can you please do this Naruto Fanfiction next right after you finish Naruto : Starting in Naruto with a Kekkei Genkai. Naruto harem fanfiction A Naruto fan is reborn as a half-saiyan in Naruto on the night of the kyuubi attack as a baby orphan boy. As the story progresses he will become stronger and find women he will love and protect. Harem Sakura Ino Choji’s Mother Kurenai Yuhi Ayame Mebuki Haruno Madam Shijimi Anko mitarashi Tsume inuzuka Tsunade Senju Shizune Hana Inuzuka Tenten Temari Mabui Mei Terumi Kurotsuchi

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HeavenlyIko

I like the story at the beginning but when I keep on reading it, I got bored it just like the other Fec, go to school, do missions but I'll wait for more chaps till then good luck 👍

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Murod

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Nobody770

It is a good Story please Write further !!!

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Dammo_Ndri

j'aime bien l'histoire le perso est cool et attachant pas de systeme ce qui est un plus et enfin il explore son potentiel sans tombe dans le fameux je vole un sharigan et boom cellule de ashirama

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WolfefloW_Too

This story deserves more props than it has receives so far, so I’m chiming in. Read it - it’s fun and well-written! MC is not OP, but has the tools to develop and does fun things with the characters of Naruto. The additional characters flesh out the world in a believable way, and I don’t see the mc being dumb like some accuse him of being. Not everyone is a minmax munchkin, and it does not feel like the plot is forcing him to not optimize . Thanks author!

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Daoist078441

даже не начинал читать, но прочитав отзывы других и ответы автора, понял что их низкая оценка несправедлива. процветания автору🩷 p.s. thanks for no harem story🩵

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Davi_Gabriel

Bem no geral da pra ler... O kekkei genkai é do clã Yuki do Gelo. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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mary_lee_9553

THIS IS SO GOOD! KEEP GOING!!!!! . . . .

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r4f4el

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Ugalblat12_1_2

Pretty good .hope it continues …………………..

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MaD

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