I understand your first point but it's not going to be like that, the MC will have very marked their point of view, something I wanted to show with the age was that no matter how young you were, it wouldn't mean they couldn't think for yourself, the MC will have moral dilemmas, but they will be for their own, they won't be infienced by others, but I can't argue with your second point, yes, the writing is garbage, but I do what I can with what I have.
Sorry if that's happening, I'll try to figure it out
Yes, when I have time I will return to all the old chapters and resolve the mistakes, right now I am doing what I can
I don't understand your words very well, but if I think that is what I am thinking, it fills me with pride that someone feels this way for something I am writing, I really appreciate and appreciate it
"Come in, let's hang out" Alica said as she entered with Arthur holding hands.
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Yes, I think I made a mistake there, I wanted to represent an adolescent relationship, although it's not that far-fetched, I've seen worse, I'm going to change it
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(WOW, thank you very much mintu_sharma for the power stones, but seriously, they are not necessary, I write because I like it and it seems that you too, I thank you very much, but it is not necessary, really, seeing how you enjoy what I write It's enough)
"Woooohooooo" was what he said, very happy with everything that happened today
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I'll keep it in mind for future meetings, but Arthur will not kill, they do not go with the character
Actually, Emma is considered a high alpha level mutant, since it is said that she is at the same level as Xavier, and Xavier is within that category, although it is only a very subjective comparison, only showing that Grace has telepathic powers very powerfuls
"Very well, that's excellent, maybe we'll have the next Emma Frost or Jean Grey, we'll have to give her the most attention in addition to a very good training" said striker, sitting back in his chair
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original Marvel: fight for tomorrow
He lost everything before he realized he had it, looking for a place in the world, he accepts the apparent goodness of some people, without realizing that it will lead him down a path that will be almost impossible to travel, a path that will lead him to have to fight for a tomorrow (I'm not a writer, this is my first story but seriously I've been toying with this idea for a long time, besides I don't speak English, so I apologize for the translation)6 Chs 471 Koleksi
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he lost everything before he realized he had it, looking for a place in the world, he accepts the apparent goodness of some people, without realizing that it will lead him down a path that will be almost impossible to travel, a path that will lead him to have to fight for a tomorrow (I'm not a writer, this is my first story but seriously I've been toying with this idea for a long time, besides I don't speak English, so I apologize for the translation)16 Chs 7 Koleksi
Arthur does not regenerate, he heals very quickly, that's why he needs so much time, although it gets shorter with each passing day, also, although I didn't write it, I had the idea that basic Carnage almost cut him in half
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