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Marvel: fight for tomorrow
Penulis: DaoistAUtOuh
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He lost everything before he realized he had it, looking for a place in the world, he accepts the apparent goodness of some people, without realizing that it will lead him down a path that will be almost impossible to travel, a path that will lead him to have to fight for a tomorrow (I'm not a writer, this is my first story but seriously I've been toying with this idea for a long time, besides I don't speak English, so I apologize for the translation)
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What to say .... hmm... you're playing the long game i get it but that doesn't make it any better but for the sake of it the story is ok plot is forced but its ok cus with how you started the story killing off his parents i expected this. The only reason i wont say you have a bad mc is because he is 10 years old so you somehow saved that part. The truth I don't wanna watch a kid make mistakes and grow up under the care of other superheroes to become a good hero cus if i wanted to read that i would actually read Spider-Man comics but again thats a personal preference so i havent removed a star for that. Btw the grammer is really bad.