Jominick

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Jominick
Jominick
9 days ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter, and seriously… I didn’t expect this story to make me care so much about the Bounts. The way you changed their narrative was pretty straightforward, but it added a surprisingly complex layer to their story. In my opinion, this shift made their ending not just tragic, but also unexpectedly merciful. It really gave them more depth and made me see them in a new light. I also have to say, watching the main character go through an emotional breakdown was incredibly compelling. It made him feel so much more human and relatable with everything that’s happening. His interactions with the other characters are fantastic, especially with Rukia and Tatsuki. Their dynamics are so well-written that they really stand out. I don’t know if this was intentional on the author’s part, but the way these relationships are being developed, it seems like there’s potential for a love triangle. Even though I’m aware that the author doesn’t intend to go down the harem route, there’s definitely room for something akin to the Inuyasha/Kagome/Kikyo situation. I'm excited to see how each character is going to deal with their own struggles and personal growth. The way you've set up their storylines makes me really eager to find out what's next. Keep up the amazing work.

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Jominick
Jominick
1 months ago
Commented

Nice chapter. I like how the story develops and how the author creatively uses plot information to logically explain the fillers. Has the author ever thought about writing a reincarnation story in the in the world of Naruto?

Jominick
Jominick
2 months ago
Replied to GG_ParryDaigod

Maybe. And if it happens, I keep wondering how the main character will do it, because just saying he used fullbring and brought her back out of nowhere because he felt like it would be pretty boring.

Jominick
Jominick
3 months ago
Replied to Moongetsu

Now I'm in doubt... Because saving Masaki could cause several changes in the story and present new challenges for the protagonist. Usually, I don't like it when characters like that are brought back to life, but I can't help being curious about how the author would continue the story If he save Masaki... I don't think I've read any interesting story where they try to bring Masaki back.

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Jominick
Jominick
4 months ago
Commented

Just caught up with the current chapters. When's the next one dropping? Really loving this fic.[img=recommend]

Jominick
Jominick
5 months ago
Posted

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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