Prone “you keep using that word… I do not think it means what you think it means…“ — Enigo Montoya, “Princess Bride”
'This is perfect!' Quinn thought. Right now he wanted to test out an idea he had, and the student had decided to become a prone target. It was perfect for his practice.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
You’re first hits for free… the next one costs double…
"Don't worry," Quinn said gritting his teeth not realizing his mistake. If he knew Fex had money he wouldn't have paid for him, he wasn't some charity worker, and right now he wanted to save up every credit he had. It was only with the goal of finding out more about vampires that Quinn was being so nice to him.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
Chances are that he bought all of the materials. Someone who cheats once will cheat again, especially if they aren’t caught and reprimanded
The fact that he managed to kill ten advanced tier beasts, was a big reminder of the difference between their two strengths, even if Quinn had a way of getting stronger, he wasn't on the same level as Fex yet.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
After 188 chapters, can we stop putting extra words in sentences to get a higher word count? I feel like this is entirely on purpose and it disrupts the flow of the reading
Quinn didn't know how to reply to Fex, the system had informed him that these rings were the bare basics for vampires, and it seemed like if he didn't to come up with something, it would reveal him even sooner.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
Frozone. From the Incredibles
"Ice path!" She created an ice path in front of her and then formed blades below her feet.
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
This poor guy is going to be traumatized again. I feel sorry for him
"Sam, go! Among all our family, you have the most outstanding talent. I believe that with your strength, it will not be difficult to get that spot!"
I'm 90 years old and the system tells me it's time to create harem
Urban · DaoistpjUWEL
Why the talking in 3rd person? It seems odd
Isabella's face had turned red at some point, she shyly asked, "Do you like touching my body? If you do, Isabella would willingly offer herself to you…"
I'm 90 years old and the system tells me it's time to create harem
Urban · DaoistpjUWEL
Although she was human trafficked, I thought he was supposed to be a cognizant and compassionate older gentleman. This is the path to damnation
"You're right, but aren't we slowly cultivating feelings now? Trust me, after tonight, you will surely fall in love with me." Alexander smiled and said.
I'm 90 years old and the system tells me it's time to create harem
Urban · DaoistpjUWEL
Helicopter
Bain watched the heart-stopping, nerve-racking scene in the video. When he saw the scene of Alexander dismantling the plane by hand, Bain was completely shocked.
I'm 90 years old and the system tells me it's time to create harem
Urban · DaoistpjUWEL
I feel like he is just adding words to meet some minimum quota without even thinking about the content. Seems deliberate after so many chapters
"Out of everyone, I thought perhaps with your abilities you might be able to do something to stop this madness, for we wish do not wish anyone innocent to get hurt."
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga