Good effort Author! Begining in a simple manner, you neatly differentiated the difference between the world and earth, eventhough the setting is more or less similar to earth. I find it fun just getting started with the first chapter itself. Great work author. Keep it up.
Good work Author! The plots seems interesting and the world background quickly grabs one's attention. I feel quite impressed by the way you described the world's situation. Best of Luck Author! Keep it up!
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Good work Author! The plot needs appreciation being your first work. I could relate to the emotions of the FL through your smooth way of writing. Best of luck! Keep it up!
Hello Author! Your plot is freakingly good and I love the fact how you described the MC. Happy to encounter an amazing plot with good pace. Great work mate! Keep it up!
Amazing plot Author! I love the way you described the world background and your way of writing is so neat where ai could feel the situation of the protagonist. Good work Author! Keep it up!
Hi there! I've reached you beforehand to get to know whether you're clear about the new world setting. You'll get to learn more about the parallel dimension in each chapters, I'll make sure to make it interesting and fun. I don't wanna give TMI about the plot just in this comment. I hope you guys check the regular updates. Waiting for your comments! Meet y'all at the next chap!
Good work Author! I loved the way you described conversation between friends. it was simple and captivating, letting readers engaged with the plot. Very good throught process and I find it interesting. Keep it up. Best of luck.
Interesting! The conversation makes me get engrossed in it. Very soothing writing and amazing world background. Waiting for your updates. Best of luck.
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Fantasy · femme_fatale