Married to the nightmare CEO

Alright, honest review after reading till the latest chapter (chapter 41 at the time of writing) The characters are honestly the best part about this book, along with their interactions. I even laughed a few times reading the lines between Amy and Jeff. The MC (Amy) is petty, like reeaally petty. But it’s the fun kind of petty. But other then dialogue and characters there is a lot of flaws in the story as well. For one, the grammar needs a lot of work. A lot of the times the flow of events are extremely confusing and it’s also very difficult to know when and who’s talking during each interaction. I think this could be easily improved if the author just puts the name and reaction of the character who is speaking at the end of each paragraph. It would really be a major boon for readability in this book. But, all in all, you can easily enjoy the story if you just focus on the dialogue (which is seriously carrying the story in my opinion) instead of the text at the end and beginning of those paragraphs. Flaw number two, there are a few events in the story that could’ve have been more fleshed out or that could’ve been explored more. (Spoiler alert!) the author could’ve maybe delved deeper into the party scene where Amy was taking to the reporters. Instead of just a one sentence speech, she could’ve thoroughly tried to ruin her father’s life during the party while at the same time also improving Jeff’s image in front of the guests. Or maybe there could’ve been drama in the party with maybe Stephanie suddenly barging in and yapping about how Jeff cheated on her and married Amy instead of her. Honestly, that party was a missed opportunity. But other then that, I really enjoyed the characters in the story and would like to see the author continue writing. If the author just fixed their grammar, then this book would be a solid five stars from me. This was my honest review on ‘From a Nightmare to a Daydream’. Hope you guys read the book and enjoy it like I have.