GRAY_WOLF_1583

GRAY_WOLF_1583

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Naruto is a sleeper who loves fan fiction. If you know beautiful fanfiction, get in touch

2021-03-03 Bergabung Turkey
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GRAY_WOLF_1583
GRAY_WOLF_1583
11 months ago
Posted

For the moment, it is progressing well, the character's dialogue and personalities are very well handled. The only problem is that the story moves a bit slowly. Don't get me wrong, the speed is okay as a subject totality, but when it comes to chapter length, the author is very adamant about leaving things on the cliffhanger, so my only real problem is the length of the chapter

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GRAY_WOLF_1583
GRAY_WOLF_1583
1 years ago
Commented

Dude think I've been following this guy for a long time. Thanks to you, I found the original fiction, thank you

GRAY_WOLF_1583
GRAY_WOLF_1583
1 years ago
Commented

Sorman hata

GRAY_WOLF_1583
GRAY_WOLF_1583
2 years ago
Commented

How often do episodes arrive?

GRAY_WOLF_1583
GRAY_WOLF_1583
2 years ago
Posted

I really liked the way the system was added, and the diatheses with his parents were so warm and pleasant, the things most of us wanted to see in anime.

GRAY_WOLF_1583
GRAY_WOLF_1583
2 years ago
Commented

Why quality fan fiction is always forgotten

GRAY_WOLF_1583
GRAY_WOLF_1583
2 years ago
Commented

I hope things get better soon.

GRAY_WOLF_1583
GRAY_WOLF_1583
2 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the episode, but the length of the episodes is shorter than before, and your editing is really nice.

GRAY_WOLF_1583
GRAY_WOLF_1583
3 years ago
Commented

Geçmiş olsun umarım düzelirsin yada şu an daha iyisindir. Kitabın çok güzel severek okuyorum :)

GRAY_WOLF_1583
GRAY_WOLF_1583
3 years ago
Commented

Başka bir sınıf hoş olabilir ama ordu oluşturmasın bence daha çok büyücü tipi olmasını tercih ederim seviye atladıkça yeni büyüler elde edebilir. Yer çekimi büyüsü, telekinezi büyüsü, element büyüleri, görünmezlik vb