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Demon Dragon Uzumaki
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A month before the graduation exam, Naruto fell into a deep coma. What happened and what changes will it bring to him.
English is not my first language.
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Good job author! You made it interesting by switching the teams! :) Never would I've expected that you've experience with strategy games and you would add it so nicely to the plot :D
Good stuff overall! Some grammar mistakes here and there but I’m not one to nitpick. Some suggestions: when dealing with romantic interests and love in general, make it unpredictable. Obviously don’t tell us who he is eventually going to end up with and make it interesting, not something other naruto fanfics have done before. Better yet, create your own love interest out of nothing and shape her toe what you want her to be like. This is the best way to be unpredictable. Another thing, try to make naruto less like a child because there have been a few times where he has shown some childish petulance when dealing with other people which goes against what was previously said about him having matured. Maybe make him have more patience or confidence and determination to return to zeref and mavis instead of acting like a mopey and depressed teenager with homesickness. Good start so far, can’t wait to see what you do with this story next! 😁
still idiotic naruto, he has been in a coma for 25 days in naruto world while his soul is living in fairy tail word for 25 years and has been adopted by mavis and forgot the name dragneel and teaches him to use magic and when he wakes up again in naruto the world the genius spill all his secret because his mama mavis tell him not to lie, to think he lives for 25 years but didn't even mature a single bit still have the mind of an 8 years old. mama said dont lie and let other use you
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4 Because there are too little charpter, Now, just remember this, if you are going to make an op character do it RIGHT...........................................
im gonna start this if by saying PLEASE CONT8NIE THE STORY, okay now that we have gotten that out the way we can begin. I loved the story and the way you crossed the 2 worlds together so good job. I also loved the characters in the story they seemed sentient and not plot driven so keep it up. updating stability can be discussed😆😁. and again the world (not naruto) with dragons and magic is perfectly crossed with naruto. so keep making these chapter because il read them.❤❤❤😁👍
Trusting, Honest MC is the most I hate in every fictional world. I would prefer manipulative bastard rather than someone who is trusting too much for the sake of good relationship or whatsoever. I doubt someone like this can live more than 20 years unless some crappy **** Plot Armor backing him. You can call me stupid or whatever is that to hate this type of MC but it just doesn't fit for me. I thought He would be badass (the first thing that gave people conclusion/imagination about your fiction is the title but meh not badass at all)
5 cause im lovin thw first 10 chapters of this novel hopefully it wont be drop and the story wont go bad. Thanks for a wonderful novel author please continue for the love of all novel. Hehehe
Très bon novel une seule chose a espérer et c'est la continuité de l'auteur.....................................................................................................................
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This book is really good and it keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading this book it’s so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you 🙏🙏🙏🙏
*great premise *poor execution of the story *the mc is brain dead *read ch 1,if your didn't dropped the book at that point then you're brain dead too...
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I love how this is going and I am hoping that this novel continues, because there are so many possibilities that this novel can take and so far the author has done an excellent job.
Good so far. I like the money loving part of Naruto. Looking forward to reading future chapters. I was wondering, this Naruto has no attachment to Sasuke, so there is no rivalry to motivate and humanise him and bring him back from the dark side. Does this mean his character will be irrelevant in the future? Cause why would Naruto struggle to help Sasuke if they are not friends? And without Naruto, Sasuke will just be the next Orichimaru, only more heartless.
Good work good work... I need more. I need more . I need more . I need more . I need more . I need more . I need more . I need more . I need more .I need more . I need more . I need more . I need more . I need more .
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(I’m am only on chapter 10) My problem is with how much of an idiot the mc is. He never lies about anything and tells anyone who asks him anything they want to know even when he knows he should keep it a secret. He has lived thirty seven years and yet still acts like a four year old. He trusts anyone and everything for absolutely no reason whatsoever. He has learned powerful magic and yet doesn’t use it in anyway whatsoever. I get that this is naruto and he is always honest and an idiot but I was hoping for a bada** naruto which is why I read this in the first place, but instead I got a complete idiot of a mc.( Author can you please put in the synopsis that the naruto in this fanfic is an overly trusting mc and that he isn’t a bad**s, because when I read the synopsis I was expecting a bad**s naruto that is slightly evil and definitely not an overly trusting good guy mc. You were extremely misleading with the name of this fanfic and the synopsis in my opinion)
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