Except it ended on the first episode
Right before the spider was about to bite me the bird destroyed the top of the hole exposing all that was inside to the outside world. Then when the bird noticed the spider and me, it compared us. Then having concluded that the spider was a better, meatier catch the bird grabbed it with its beak and flew away. Seeing this unfortunate scene for the spider unfold in front of me I couldn't resist laughing at its bad luck...
Fantasy · PancakesWitch
I'd have to say this is one of the better WebNovels I have read. I am yet to finish it, but the grammar is terrible. It can make it hard to understand what's going on and some things seem far too convenient, for example, you meet a strange talking cat that calls you a pain in the ass and then asks you to be family and live with it? No hesitation brother. I dread WebNovels because so many of them seem like blatant copy and paste, not to mention I don't particularly care for cultivation novels. So far, the actual story is good, the characters are likable and the world is pretty good too. I enjoy it. Not wrong in any regard other than grammar. If the grammar were to improve, I wouldn't hesitate to give this a better rating.
Hello, I might be the author but I'm still gonna review my own book! very good. great writing. only abandoned once. That's why I'm writing this! You probably know I abandoned this a while ago, but I have picked it back up! also I didn't rate this a five because the stability of updates it terrible, considering I abandoned it once. But I have completely finished editing the current chapters, expect more soon!
aaaaAAAAAAArthur, whe need to go to tahiti, tahiti arthur, we need to go to tahiti please aAAArthir tahiti think about the tahiti arthur tahiti we must go
poggers
sussy
Bab ini telah dihapus.
Fantasy · x2xtrouble
Plan to, just had to catch up with some stuff IRL, might re-do novel though.
Hello! Shameless review here- Thats getting repetitive in novels, so you know what, I have shame. Anyways, hello! I am x2xTrouble! which is obvious, but I am unsure of where this novel is going, I have the first arc planned, but I'm just using that as a jumpstart, so sorry if somethings seem repetitive or if somethings change later for convenience reasons. But, please enjoy! Grab a bucket of popcorn, and read! Though, might not want to get too much popcorn because there aren't very many chapters right now. Oh, and of course it's a five-star review.
"I guess it would be useful in water, but now? Definitely!"
WAIT! DEACTIVATE SKILL!... Is this even a skill? It's horrible! I almost died! Maybe this was what caused that stupid walking fish to suffocate to death… Sigh… I guess it would be useful if I go swimming but not now! Definitely !"
Epic of Caterpillar
Fantasy · PancakesWitch