well you got the 4 letter thing most seem to ignore . I think it's a good guess
your development my be slow ,but it reads well .. there is a trade off there !!
I realized that I've been stretching this arc for too long, and the main character hasn't had much character development, so this lead to that.
Surviving The Novel
Fantasy · Shiroi_kage
your story is good and I am liking it very much . I truly hope you keep writing .
did you mean survive,not surprise?
The voice was actually Iris' own will that took the form of the aura of the healing ability in order to make her own subconscious understand the situation she was in and make her do the necessary steps in order to surprise.
Universal Power System
Fantasy · KingU
really like the storyline . can wait for more
place your bets , place your bets!!!!my bet is .01
Irio had 0.1%
Martial Arts System
Action · Alekzi
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
where I know you have to go to a world venue and incorporate the players into your story what happened to the basic mechanic we were following all of a sudden he's got new gear we know nothing of seems like you're glossing on him and going to the rest of the world
ok what are the dailka are they the one that keep the vampires in line and force the rules?
As Leo looked over at the two students, a thought soon planted itself in his head, 'Is there an actual threat right underneath our noses that is probably far larger than the Dalki?'
My Vampire System
Fantasy · JKSManga
if the shadows are so powerful it's going to be a uphill fight .hope you have a trick up your sleeve !
Extra's Magic
Fantasy · Gurdon