Laroon67

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Laroon67
Laroon67
6 months ago
Commented

Great job, I hope there will be even more new chapters. I really hope for this work.

Laroon67
Laroon67
11 months ago
Commented

Get well soon, I also hope you don't abandon this fanfic.

Laroon67
Laroon67
1 years ago
Commented

it would be possible to add some villain from the magicians, he would take something like a grimoire from them to expand his knowledge of magic.

Laroon67
Laroon67
1 years ago
Commented

good fan fiction. but please do not highlight the words of the system in bold, otherwise the translator does not translate it.

Laroon67
Laroon67
1 years ago
Commented

it would be possible to have a youth series Liv and Maddy, forward to success (big time rush) or something like that, and then when he has a good reputation, then you can take a swing at Titanic, Avatar, DC and Marvel movies. It can also be done that polygamy is legal in his world, otherwise his love interest is mainly due to the fact that the system is connected with the mountains of the modern family.

Laroon67
Laroon67
1 years ago
Replied to Sosuke_Aizen777

Навряди, у него ещё была красная энергия которая его окружала в начале, это скорее всего была аура, как у некоего вампира.

Laroon67
Laroon67
Laroon67
2 years ago
Commented

Let the grimoire grant him a connection to the Akasha Chonicles (knowledge of all magic from the past, present and future in the entire multiverse)