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Monarch Of Shadows In Douluo
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Arlos a weeb from modern times gets reincarnated in the world of Douluo Dalu with martial of the shadow monarch and a system to help him
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this is my first time writing something so please don't judge too hard but be sure to let me know where I'm doing a mistake and I'll try to improve myself seeing your criticisms...hehehehe
this version shadow monarch is a version I think is more suited for soul land so I modified it but the core abilities are the same but he won't be using a dager but something more interesting
the system he'll be having is a quest system and not those annoying type of system.
the system let's him create his own quests, his own reward, and also the penalty...
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I was looking for a douluo fic with the ten shadows and I found this one, it's an AU and there aren't many spelling errors, the MC's personality is acceptable, he's not a psychopath.I found the system to be a bit Op, depending on how the plot unfolds, it could get boring very quickly, not even a love interest was introduced.It's not a translation and for the first time writing it, it's very good, there were some things that I personally didn't like much but maybe when there are more chapters I'll go back and read it
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shameless 5 star review to my first work.