Lencana 18
Moments 277
this chapter has quite a bit of errors/ repetitions.
The warmth of a home-cooked meal, the quiet companionship – it was a strange comfort in this fortress of shadows. But the real test loomed. Today was the day I was thrown into Mother's "garden."
The Extra Wants Control
Fantasy · Kas73_
toru should be waifu. Harem is for the weak.
Toru`s smile was too precious for the world. The world was not worthy of such beauty.
My Hero Academia : The Symbol of Power
Anime & Comics · Emmanuel_Capricorn
class*
"Ladies and gentleman, Heros and heroines!!! Let us welcome the calss which manage to survive a villain attack as first years!!" Present Mic yelled and the people erupted into an excited cheer.
My Hero Academia : The Symbol of Power
Anime & Comics · Emmanuel_Capricorn
instead of using ground twice. change it to earth the first time.
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Dimensional Artificer: Forge of Creation
Fantasy · Jayzentz
please don't make him have to shout the name of his skills to activate.
To make chants served a dual purpose: not only did they facilitate casting spells by guiding the flow of mana, but they also helped Sebastian memorize the process.
Godlike: The Rise of a Skill-stealing Rune Master chasing revenge
Fantasy · PilgrimJagger
Pick one. Get to know them both. Then choose. orrrr have readers choose waifu. (I vote Ranni)
I didn't like spending money, but this could be a great opportunity to get closer to Ranni .. or Mikeyla .. ughh I'm the worst, just pick one .. or pick all?
First we fell.
Fantasy · Stivanstin
I feel like this is outta place. it should either be changed or just deleted in general.
It happened very fortuitously.
Catastrophe Card King
Games · Blindness
will this become a harem?
ch 187 Chapter 187- Road Trip In An Apocalyptic World
Dimension Weaver: My Wife Is The Dragon Empress!
Fantasy · Frost_Bite8
no such thing
I think I went overboard and made the chapter too long
Skill Forge: Broken Extra Character
Fantasy · Dark_Eyez
??
I pity the poor sap that has to ascend to the next circle without my [Cultivation] skill.
How To Cheat Your Way To The Top
Fantasy · Zeus_Machina
All-knowing Author. I must know, will there be a harem or no?
ch 180 Chapter 180- Fire Lead
Dimension Weaver: My Wife Is The Dragon Empress!
Fantasy · Frost_Bite8
I feel like the "gosa waters" is repeated to much here.
After four days of flight, they had reached the coastline of Gosa Waters.
School Transmigration: I, Chosen as the Saint by Dragons at the Start
Fantasy · Sesame_Cookies
just finished my binge read of this lovely novel and now it's time for a mini-review!!Overall, the story is superb. Although it does take a bit to pick up in pace, it's worth the wait. The slight errors in Grammer are neglible. Overall a great read. Can't wait for more!(side note- it'd be interesting if mc could use his quirk to maybe give/alter people's quirk factor. or maybe his at least. Only reason I say it'd be possible is when he mentioned how he shape-shifts, Like his body is lines of code and he just edits it. He could do that to others once he reaches a certain mastery over his quirk. Just a thought.)
ch 85 Chapter 84:- Attackers Identity
MHA:-Glitch In Reality
Anime & Comics · Numix
because the only other powered person he's seen other than him and David is there? I feel like that's a good reason.
With little time for contemplation, Malachi decided to inform the group upstairs first that they were safe to come outside. There was no specific reason for choosing this group first; it was a quick, instinctive decision.
Strongest Dad In The Apocalypse
Fantasy · Aurora_Drakon
no problem! I try to do it when I catch repeated mistakes. I'd recommend re-reading what you have posted so far and check for errors.
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Part-Time Godkiller
Fantasy · Bodhi_sattva
I am now far more inclined to read this through. However, small tip, you often no place "i" before "am" so it comes as "am sorry, ____"
But what he or Lovette didn't expect was that that very determination would be a catalyst of something much greater and beautiful in Cole's journey.
The flame Monarch
Fantasy · Kinshu_War
hopefully no harem.
But what he or Lovette didn't expect was that that very determination would be a catalyst of something much greater and beautiful in Cole's journey.
The flame Monarch
Fantasy · Kinshu_War
I'm gonna cry. was so excited to see him get them just to be cut off. I feel betrayed. this novel is fantastic and hilarious. The Grammer is fine with little to no mistakes and everything else is done well. My only complaint is there aren't more chapters. Keep up the great work author!!
ch 30 Surprise!
Happy Face
Fantasy · Nephilim_Arctica