Great_king

Great_king

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Great_king
Great_king
3 months ago
Commented

The games we play by ryuggi

Also, I wasted a lot of time finding fanfics on Webnovel, but most of them are unbearable at the moment. It's either smut or translated stuff that doesn't appeal to anyone, which is frustrating.

Douluo Dalu: This herrscher is too weird.

Douluo Dalu: This herrscher is too weird.

Anime & Comics · ArkhamPrisoner425

Great_king
Great_king
Great_king
5 months ago
Commented

In marvel fitz-Simmons are two separate people. I’m not sure if your addding oc content but fits-Simmons was just a nickname.

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Great_king
Great_king
9 months ago
Commented

You’ve already established this earth is different from the main continuity, you could take some liberties with the in universe content, make crossovers, or original content that was created in “response” to this new Batman. You could also just have him say it he created it for his own entertainment or to make things slightly more convenient for him.

Great_king
Great_king
1 years ago
Commented

Quick question, isn’t he getting too strong too fast? I get that count dooku has this level of skill and power but how has the mc been able to near effortlessly beat both Soren and an entire army of mutant soldiers when the template isn’t even half way through?

Great_king
Great_king
1 years ago
Commented

Chapter was good, I feel like you switched POV’s too much. I think it would be easier to tell the whole fight in a single sitting then constantly switiching perspectives as the impact of the entire fight and callum’s skill in the sword felt watered down.

Great_king
Great_king
1 years ago
Commented

Batman

Great_king
Great_king
Great_king
1 years ago
Commented

Could have her act like season 5/6 Beth, something to keep the MC grounded and a tad bit more humane.

[A/N: I don't know what to do with the care taker. Should she die? I haven't even created a identity for her besides of taking care of the main character. Should she be an important character from the DC universe? Should she be from an anime? So for now she a blank character that will die eventually but that might change, so I am open to any suggestions.]

Young Justice: Smartest Man

Young Justice: Smartest Man

TV · Unknownducky