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Original fanfic, not a translation.
What happens when a young soul reincarnates a Huo Yuhao from Soul land II.
Will he follow the original route where all what awaits him at the end is a collar around the neck?
or
will he follow his own route clear of manipulation, exploitation and misery.
Join this young soul on his new journey in a familiar and an unfamiliar world.
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New writer here, I hope you comment and review with honesty.
Send memes in paragraphs comments if you find a reference or sth. I enjoy checking the comments.
English is not my main language, I try to improve it as much as I can.
Douluo Dalu or any worlds visited are not mine
The picture is not mine from google.
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Tulis ulasanThe typical 5-star review from writers to their story. We have reached nearly 300 collection and 50k views. Honestly, quiet surprising. I hope you can keep commenting on the chapters. Share your thoughts, memes and waifu pics. That is all for now. Bye.
a fanfic that has kiana in it is a good civilization, but the huge downside is that it's only 11 chapters, and honestly, at first, I thought this was an mtl, lol can't really trust when a fanfic has douluo dalu in its title
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Membuka SPOILERin too lazy to write, basically this is a good one to read (a good plot, grammar, and character) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The story has potential and it's pretty good with the use of some abilities, Just in my personal opinion, mc has too much power from the start. For example, I like the skill he chose for the first time use of that golden energy but he uses of those abilities are too diverse and advanced without any training and familiarity. Take the illusion manipulation ability for example, the way he used it is something I would expect from Marlin or other pro illusion users. He is way too good at them in very little time. Otherwise it's a good fanfiction.👍👍❤️😇
let's see..what makes this fanfic enjoyable: Mc: .not cringy. not braindead like any op cultivation protagonist. not annoying. writing quality: really really good and the chapters are minimum 2k words without useless info dump or anything. very few grammatic error. updating stability: decent at least one chapter everyday overall for me i am enjoying so far definitely one of the best reads about soul land ff.
Found a new fic that i like that has Kiana and as a vivid fan of honkai a 5/5 review BOW DOWN TO THE TUNA GODDESS
The story so far is really good the MC takes smart choices .The Grammer is good and stability of updates with chapters of +1.7k words. I hope this doesn't get dropped 👍
Introducing meta essence of power/skill creation really makes it more interesting where the story will be going.
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Looking Forward of your work development for your story and having high expectation for this one too and I hope you won't drop it midways