Dude….he’s 14 vs someone with major hero experience, no quirk besides erasure so he’s very developed in hand-to-hand combat, and he’s under equipped. Add in it only being Chapter 2 and it’s hard not to see how he’s on the losing end
Peter saw stars as his world spun, he barely dodged another punch to the gut before he backflipped across the room to get some distance.
Movies · Huvnn
Aww. Good riddance
In the voting there was a third option and the one that was repeated the most: both. So I will follow that route. I will try to do it as best and natural as possible. Thanks for the comments.
TV · Nathe07
Claustrophobia leads to mini panic attacks, some can feel that level of claustrophobic in large crowds if they aren’t used to or don’t like being around that many people.
After a few seconds, he regained his composure and looked up. The person helping him escape was Enid, who was looking at him worriedly.
TV · Nathe07
Thanks for another great chapter 🙏
ch 11 Training Under Coach Reynolds
Sports · Mujunel_the_Mystic
You could just shorten it to their nicknames, like instead of his whole name and his nickname it could just be “Tank” when in a team setting
Paragraf ini telah dihapus.
Sports · Mujunel_the_Mystic
Welcome back thanks for the chapter 🙏
Dragon Problems
TV · TheEndlessAbyss
Nice chapter keep up the awesome work 👍
ch 10 First Steps with the Black Panthers
Sports · Mujunel_the_Mystic
Yeah I can see where you’re coming from, but as a lot of people say, most of the impact is well received by the pads. The recent changes to the game have been protecting players from getting clocked like that most of the time, though it still happens you’ll usually only see players get the wind knocked out of them on most CLEAN hits. Whereas the illegal hits are REALLY self evident by the receiver taking a mid game nap.
Jackson's gaze followed the running backs and wide receivers, imagining himself among them. He clenched his fists, feeling the energy of Sun Qi coursing through him—a silent promise that he would soon be one of them. All he needed to do was perform well during the tryouts.
Sports · Mujunel_the_Mystic
Well in todays game they get the most attention, protection, utilization, and are usually huge offensive weapons. Back in the day, running backs were the better positions to be in but they took A LOT of abuse during games. Not to mention on defense it’s crazy difficult to guard a receiver properly since they get so much attention it’s often impossible for defenses to do their job because of controversial penalties.
Jackson's gaze followed the running backs and wide receivers, imagining himself among them. He clenched his fists, feeling the energy of Sun Qi coursing through him—a silent promise that he would soon be one of them. All he needed to do was perform well during the tryouts.
Sports · Mujunel_the_Mystic
Welcome back! Really missed the chapters🙏
Trial
Chapter 11: Battle Trail
Anime & Comics · DaoistJIIvmp
The entire chapter needs “trail” changed to “trial”
ch 0 9 Chapter 10: Costume
Anime & Comics · DaoistJIIvmp
Congrats on 100! 🎉 🎊 🎉
Great chapter really liking the development of events and reveals please keep it up 🙏
ch 19 Chapter 18 Pokémon.com
Anime & Comics · LORD_INDRA_
Loving what you’re doing so far, the writing isn’t perfect but it’s still readable and doesn’t take away too much from the story. I am really looking forward to you introducing nuzlocke’s and peoples reactions to such a way to play the game. That being said please keep going 🙏
ch 16 ⚠️⚠️Attention⚠️⚠️
Anime & Comics · LORD_INDRA_
We will be here 🫡 Thanks for not dropping 🙏
ch 23 Update V2(Not A Chapter)
TV · TheEndlessAbyss
Thanks for another great chapter 🙏
Chapter 14 Livestream end
Anime & Comics · LORD_INDRA_
First and foremost, no one cares if you drop or not. Secondly, this is a 14 year old with no training or real development add in how bad his scavenged equipment is and we have this situation.
Peter didn't even bother to struggle against his bonds, he knew only people with All Might level strength could break out of the capture cloth currently around him.
MHA : Spider-Man
Movies · Huvnn