See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon
I also thought it seemed quite restrictive, I appreciate you sharing your prospective on the matter.
I was wondering why haven’t you signed a contract with webnovel?
I dont know I started working on a book I like more than this one, but I im most likely gonna try to do more stable updates.
I definitely taking a pause, but i started a new book that I like better called the original mages.
Those are definitely issues i have noticed, and I am working on improving my writing with every chapter. I really appreciate you reviewIng my book, and giving your honest thoughts.
I’m not gonna spoil my own story.
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original The Dungeon System
On Liam’s 16th birthday day he awakens his first ability, but to his dismay it is useless. Soon enough though he is granted a system, and things start to look up for him, or not.13 Chs 103 Koleksi
Honestly the system mechanic is too complicated where its kinda annoying to write the story, so I got bored of writing it. I also felt like the system was kinda hard to follow.
The Dungeon System
Fantasy · SirGlue