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The Dungeon System

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Penulis: SirGlue

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On Liam’s 16th birthday day he awakens his first ability, but to his dismay it is useless. Soon enough though he is granted a system, and things start to look up for him, or not.

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Status Power Mingguan

Rank -- Peringkat Power
Stone -- Power stone

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  • Stabilitas Pembaruan
  • Pengembangan Cerita
  • Desain Karakter
  • Latar Belakang Dunia

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AnthonyCerbic

I know 3.6 I gave the story looks like low score, but its only because of many novels on this site get unrealisticly skewed scores like, all 5 stars on some cheap Chinese cookie-cutter cultivation. Its 3.6 but its on a fair scale of 1-5, not the usual 4.5-5, OK? Anyway, a pretty decent start for the story. A bit weak on the "hook" - like, there's no world to save, there's no imminent peril to deal with - but fairly interesting still, kinda slice-of-life-ish. Writing style is unpolished and lacks flavor, but not horrid and hopefully will improve with time; MC is sympathetic and promising. Basically, I am looking forward for more chapters, so its already better than 95% of the usual crap.

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