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Separate comment not regarding the chapter which was great. I think there should be more difficulties the mc encounters where he either fails or gets screwed over or things didn't go like he expected. This is to make the story more interesting and have him experience struggles that were unexpected and have less predictable outcomes. This is just my opinion at the end of the day.
I don't think it's a good idea for the mc to be able to give out the bloodline upgrades like candy. He can literally make an army of 8 star warriors with enough time which seems ridiculous. I think it should either be not possible to give out upgrades or he has to meet certain conditions or limit the amount to a certain cap on how many he can give out.
By any chance did you add 1 too many zeros on how many 2nd and 3rd orders he has to kill? Haha his reaction was funny though.. I feel like the order levels is being broken too much by this guy, it's weird if he's the only one like this because it may get boring once he reaches a higher order. I feel like if he becomes too strong compared to others at the same order than the book will get boring once he reaches a higher order.
This is a good twist, I felt like ever since the first meeting with everblood everything has been going Ren's way without too much trouble so it's interesting now that things didn't go as smoothly
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