swaran

swaran

male LV 5

just a guy looking for something interesting to read

2018-08-18 Bergabung India
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swaran
swaran
2 months ago
Commented

bro can you please go back to writing the novel like you did in the previous volumes and stop this weird volume at once

swaran
swaran
5 months ago
Commented

I don't understand this new world doesn't look like it belongs in this novel

swaran
swaran
8 months ago
Commented

might as well bring Broly to this universe

swaran
swaran
8 months ago
Commented

isn't it about time that MC heads towards other world's, if you're going to make him dual to or stronger than dragon gods there's really not many world's which he can go aside from hakoniwa, after all even DC or Marvel world only has a few comic universe where there are stronger characters than them

swaran
swaran
9 months ago
Commented

vile kuzu, the he'll kund of naming sense do you have, who named their MC 'trash'

swaran
swaran
9 months ago
Commented

so the bustard Mc is just a licker

swaran
swaran
9 months ago
Commented

Dude you should use a proper cultivating system rather than just using Surya namaskar as a way to increase MC strength as it feels weird, you can use the kundli and Chakra path openings as a cultivation system , also chinese using Surya namaskar feels weird because they will never accept something from other culture directly without changing it to suit their own culture and claiming it their original.

swaran
swaran
9 months ago
Commented

dude why don't bring the mondaiji tachi world into the mix as that world was created because they can take care of every other universe that existed

swaran
swaran
12 months ago
Commented

her name is tatsuki not tatsumaki

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swaran
swaran
1 years ago
Commented

Might as well let aizen and ichigo to cross here, i believe the world will become much more interesting