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The Spear of Longinus most would say it’s the most powerful sacred gear in this universe .
It holds the dying will of the Biblical God yet why am the guy stuck with it!
And why am I in the land of oppai and OP Gods!
*Sigh*
Well then let’s see how this goes…
(Any and all recognizable characters and settings belong to their original authors, and I am in no way, claiming them as my own.)
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Tulis ulasanCan read past chapter 1 the fact mc as kid withou knowing how to fight can fight against adult that know magic is ridiculous, even more so when he fights many at the same time. Even worst is that author simple give mc 3 cheat withou any explanation of why only now he is gaining it
so far its just the mc training against shadow creatures for 80% of the novel. might come back if the chapters update frequently but so far its trash.
While the story started well enough, he got strong really fast but didn’t change accordingly, it just feels weird to see a guy stronger then all the gods in the pantheon interacting with mortals that he met after becoming powerful like they were equals, its like seeing a billionaire sitting in the middle of the street chatting with a homeless guy, just feels weird. Not to mention that there is no real direction to the story, things just seemed to happen to forcefully and fast.
Membuka SPOILERA dxd fic with a Cao Cao SI which isn't normally done and the MC hasn't just run to the devils so this not a canon rehash which is a very big plus point for this fanfic. The power of Get Creative is busted and add in the essence of Blank and Archmage should tell you that the MC will become OP in the future. But the author has made quite an effort to make sure that this fic doesn't become just another power fantasy.
Es muy buena y es interesante, espero con ansias los siguientes capítulos. ........................................................ ......................................................................................................... ..................................................... ......................................................................................................... ..................................................... .........................................................................................................
First of many dxd that hooked me up with such great force that i had to finish it from start to end with no breaks. (i hope it's continued and updated regularly as fast as possible.)P.S:nowadays some writers just post a notice sometimes that they are starting some other work or dropping(mostly due to some reader's hateful cimments) BUT PLEASE I HOPE YOU CAN CONTINUE THIS WORK AND ROOTING FOR YOU TO ATLEAST GO UP TO 400-500 CHAPTERS IN THIS WORK.
i have not read it yet but i want to confirmed something first, do you read the light novel high school dxd and shin high school dxd to got some ideas about the limit of cao cao power and how it truly work?
The writing is good, I've checked five chapters and definitely plan to read it when it reaches 100 chapters. A few things that made me temporarily lose interest tho- You should've used third PoV instead of first in the beginning chapters because your style of writing was more narrative then it was 'character' it comes as dull and makes the mc seem boring or 'emotionless'? ig. 2. A few things were rushed that felt off. The vials... it was too random and out of place, I'd just give him a headache and stuff information into his mind and explain briefly what every vial does. I felt lost reading that. The other thing is the first fight in which you said 'whispers'. Having just written 'duck', 'step left', 'jump' in between paragraphs would be helpful. Vague commands like these would let us understand as readers why the sickly boy was able to even fight.Anyways, like the fic. Will read it in the future.
Such an amazing fic, regret I decided to read it first instead of hoarding more chapters. Such an amazing fic, regret I decided to read it first instead of hoarding more chapters.
Didn’t realize you were also the author of Finding Purpose. I saw the maidenless status and the harem tag and was wondering if there was going to be romance? And if so, no ntr or yuri like Finding Purpose?
Not a bad read, kinda lost me a bit when he was being trained by Scathach though. Not that there's anything wrong with that, just feels kinda overused to me. Like every spear user in fanfic has to be trained by Scathach even when they don't use a spear. It's not really something I hold against the author tbh, it's convenient due to her situation and it doesn't take away much from the story in terms of quality. Enough of my rant, I like the story so give it a read and if you like it then give it a fair review.
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Another dxd fic huh... I hope this one survives but looking at what the author said about the MC being ultimate class in 4 years while having 3 essence compared to issei the sopposed weakest sekiryuutei going to heavenly dragon class in one year... Yeah i dont think it will go anywhere, so bey😉😉