Piphipi

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2018-05-19 Bergabung Global
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Piphipi
Piphipi
2 years ago
Commented

I’ve read most of the way through the DD options, go with Qian Renxue. The era of the dragon king was way too cliche.

Piphipi
Piphipi
2 years ago
Commented

Rewrite please. It has a good concept, but a lot of the early chapters could be greatly improved. That early arc against the evil spirit masters should have been so long. 3-5 chapters would have been enough.

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Piphipi
3 years ago
Commented

Since they space will heal him after a fight can’t he continuously use evening dragon?

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Piphipi
Piphipi
3 years ago
Commented

I can just see Tian Long dropping hints that he knows Jasmine is his brothers “master” or hinting that the Netherworld Umbura Flower is guarded by a weakened true devil. Or some other “helpful hints” just for laughs.

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Piphipi
3 years ago
Commented

That was amazing, I had trouble stopping my laughter. Thanks for the chapter.

Piphipi
Piphipi
3 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter. Though I don’t think you meant to duplicate post it.

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Piphipi
3 years ago
Commented

If she wins? It should be when she wins.