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Reborn as 'Twin' to Xiao Che, Xiao Tian Long cheats surpasses even the original Protagonist, pity that Xiao Tian Long goal in life is quite different then Most Cultivation novels...
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Tulis ulasanAuthor. It should be illegal to have so much good books! The only good ATG fanfic, a rare good multiverse travel, and another good ATG fanfic?! Tell me are you sure you donโt have a system and have experienced this yourself
This story is fucking awesome, its one of the best atg stories here, and the mc is a badass, who isnt a retard and isnt some cliche nice guy.
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This author is simply an ace in writing ATG novels. Everything is great again, as in previous novels. I just hope that the author will be able to better express this side of the MC's attitude towards Yoon Che. We also hope that there really will be a big harem, as our MC wants.
I donโt liek this book the author just wants a harem instant power up not that Iโm against it but the way he did it was crude and forced af. The mc is just **** he thinks with his cock โimprintingโ himself on a little girl. This mc is very fucking unlike able to me . Gl tho
Chapter 6 is my stop. I hate when things are forced just for plot. I could stomach how easily he took Chu Yueli but the fact that no one seems to care much about the supposed death of "Yun Che" and easily prepared a wedding the next day was just beyong stupid. Especially when no one questioned how he easily dismissed the "death" of his brother and was only planning on observing. Tell me, if someone killed your family, what would you do? Observe? Obviously, the author didn't plan this through
This is the debut of my new Bronor as an Older Bronor With a new transformation to my bronor complete my bronor will soon be able to take over the world
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Awesome start for a ATG fanfic......................................................................................................................................................
feels a bit ordinary in the beginning, but the longer the author gets better at writing this novel, especially in writing the plot, I also really like the harem and this is pure wish fulfillment which suits my taste
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Membuka SPOILER"If you cannot embrace the concept of true peace, you are not worthy of even calling yourself my wife by Yun Che
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I really like the way everything just fits together....it was really nice he was from start to end the 'good' guy...he even gave his childhood sweetheart for his brother...but damn he is so fucking him all over .....I am even surprised he didn't take his poison pearl and that necklace maybe he will take it too when he slays the demon later on.... Its so awesome, take everything you want and still be the 'good' guy......๐๐๐
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Dude, this asshole started destroying sects whilst he was 11 or so, and traveled the land destroying sects..How the fk is he alive? he would've been targeted by everyone and either forced to join or killed off,,,and since this dude used his name wouldnt people just kidnap family? I like OP MC but not retards like this...MC should've hidden his identity instead. Also why isnt he engaged to the xia chick instead of yun che ...so stupid...MC was the son for the xia chicks father BF and their promise works as long as the fiance is either one of his sons.... Also what do u mean this is different?...this MC just shows OF like a cunt, like every other SI in a cultivation FF, MC wins every fight cause of plot....and has no repercussions cause of plot. This dude even attacked a young master... so much stupid **** happens in ONE chp