Patoverone

Patoverone

male LV 5

Just another immortal cultivator

2018-05-07 Bergabung Argentina
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Patoverone
Patoverone
3 months ago
Commented

Milotic's most practiced skills involved using its tail, a technique honed from its time as a Magikarp. I think you wanted to translate feebas here.....

Milotic's most practiced skills involved using its tail, a technique honed from its time as a Magikarp. Rex found Milotic's physical attacks more potent than its special attacks, evident from the strong muscles on its tail.

Pokemon: I'm a Farmer

Pokemon: I'm a Farmer

Anime & Comics · RockyRoad891

Patoverone
Patoverone
6 months ago
Posted

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Patoverone
Patoverone
9 months ago
Commented

i think you mean to enlighten satoru, cause he is the one talking with sakumo, not itachi

Patoverone
Patoverone
10 months ago
Commented

I believe its the right choice, you have to understand that the protagonist also has a life beside work and video games, you have to explore more slice of life topics, and elaborate independent arcs

(I believe the novel is progressing too quickly, so I thought about slowing down a bit. Let me know if you have any objections.)

Tycoon of Video Games

Tycoon of Video Games

Video Games · NewComer714

Patoverone
Patoverone
2 years ago
Commented

Hands up in the air Argentina

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Patoverone
Patoverone
2 years ago
Commented

you have repeat the "looking" word here.

"He knew," said Amelia. "There wasn't a single word of chatter about the attack or even a peep anywhere that the Death Eaters were about to do something, and we have been looking actively looking for them since the carnival," he eyes turned sharp, "but he knew that You-Know-Who was going to attack me, and he came barging in.

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]

Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader

Patoverone
Patoverone
3 years ago
Posted

I have to say, one of the best things to read in webnovel. Keep up the good work. I hope that when you finish this fanfic you could continue the kuroko no basket fiction. Thnx

Patoverone
Patoverone
3 years ago
Posted

Its one of the only fictions in webnovel which is consistent in uploading content, and has a stock of chapters plenty for anyone to pass the time reading. The grammar quality of them is bit lacking sometimes, but it doesnt bother you in the long term. I assume that with a good editor it could be solved.

Patoverone
Patoverone
4 years ago
Commented

"Don't get angry Luffy, stretch your hand, and grab ZORO as he has fallen into the water. Luffy nods at this and does so, grabbing Zoro and pulling him out of the salty waters.

Patoverone
Patoverone
4 years ago
Commented

the assassin suddenly jumped in the air and let out a ferocious spin kick at the ASSASSIN'S chest (i think here would be mei's chest)