Linxiaoming

Thank you for the chapter my good sir hats off to you for great story. Also for occlumency try to build a system higher then the one you have it would be interesting to see sort of like mental energy type stuff but don’ go all xanxia lol Ji write how u feel like doing just a thought I wished to share cudos and hope you make a patereon and make some real money off of this great story

Also I feel like flitwick makes a cool mentor personally

May I recommend learning enchanting and specializing in charms master for the reason being I feel enchanting is very cool as it can also be used as wards which will help him use magic in the summer but also compliment his dueling style say an enchanted item that can store a spell like bombarta maxima used in life death situation ?? Just a thought

Please explore potions or charms or transfiguration

Awsome chap bro. Plzzz don’ bash anyone here I’ good off of that fanfic.net has many but I would say you’re going at a good pace so keep it up

I like it man it’ awsome I like the way you portray magic now add in mind magic and we begin an Awsome adventure I like padma patil she’s cool

Common boyo genius writer one more chap plzzzz today it’ cuz of the face slapping I wanna see

Are you gonna make the golden trio stand on the mc side