the only plot hole that concerns me is that by using so much of mangekyou sharingan shushi should have become blind as more powerful the power more energy it consume in orignal sauske got blind realy quick as shusui mangekyou sharingan has more time delay because his body and eye cannnot handle the burdurn of contineous use of it
Islam religion is not bad but muslim can be. The thing is many muslim organization (not every) in the name of islam conduct inhumane operations in middle east or like in Jammu and Kashmir which creates a bad reputation for muslim and as muslim followa islam therefore created bad image for islam. People will say it is in every religion but what we see is what we buy. we see these terrorist terrorising civilians in the name of jihad or islam. Islam cannot be evil but Muslim can be
I will not involve religion in more chapters unless you have questions, then you're free to ask, anything you want 😉 every now and then I might add a beautiful verse from the Quran or the sayings of the Prophet, but except for that I won't be talking about religion.
Naruto: Clan of Shinobi
Anime & Comics · Passerby_Venne
I believe that story was ok but you could have add some pov from konoha how they feel about Karen and also add a love angle or something like that just make sure to increase the anticipated battle between konoha and Karen also add some tradegy too in story like karen father killed and head is presented to karen or mother is brainwashed or something like thai
It appears that my first novel, 'Uchiha's Way to Become a King,' has not resonated with many readers. After careful consideration, I believe the main reason for this might be that I took Uchiha Karan completely outside of Konoha, thereby eliminating the presence of the original characters. Therefore, I have made the decision to rewrite the novel in a different manner. I will remove the current version and plan to upload the revised edition within the next 48 hours.
Uchihas way to become a King
Anime & Comics · Hkj
make him a marine to protect nico fom them till the doflamingo arc
In both cases the story will greatly change I don't find it interesting to write a story that's a basic replica of the original.
One Piece: My Wife is Nico Robin
Anime & Comics · Normal_Dude
Its Blaise Zabini
Blaise Shabini. This is the last student at the time of the sorting ceremony just now.
Harry Potter : Glory of the Purebloods
Book&Literature · AshGod7
no first year know about sorting hat and older students dont tell about it as it is a suprise and their tradition
However, Ye Ting, who had read the original work, immediately had a countermeasure: "I heard from others that there is still a way to change the decision of the sorting hat. As long as you always think about which house you want to go to, the sorting hat will also refer to your opinion. You can try it. If it succeeds, you can go to that house.
The God of All Realms Starts With Harry Potter
Others · echoplasm
elemental , creation or fate magic
If you have any ideas regarding the magic you want to see in this fiction or want to offer some ideas regarding the progression. Move onto the DISCORD Server and blast those ideas.
HP: A Magical Journey [Complete]
Book&Literature · FictionOnlyReader
My adopted father is a child abducter
Note: I realise that a lot of dirty minded people think that the mc is gonna raise hinata as his wife after reading the title. Any suggestions on what I should change it to?
In Kumogakure after adopting Hinata Hyuga.
Anime & Comics · Crystal_Cat
after
Bab ini telah dihapus.
Marvel : Different Peter Parker
Movies · INSANE_GAMER
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original Strongest Senior in world of Harry Potter
"Adam Salvatore, the man reigning over the world of magic." Rita Skeeter exclaimed, "No more gimmicks. Focus on the words of Salvatore and Dumbledore." Snape added, "You all are the worst I have ever taught, except for Adam. He is exceptional. Slytherin gains 10 points." Hermione inquired, "Senior Adam, may I ask you a question?" Harry pondered, "Why did the boys who survived face such different outcomes?" Dumbledore explained, "Adam is the most exceptional student in the history of Hogwarts, surpassing them all." Adam sighed, "Why am I constantly in the spotlight? It's exhausting to be a celebrity."14 Chs 247 Koleksi
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[I've Already Confronted the Five Kage, and the System Just Arrived!]
Naruto: Monthly Refreshing Passive System
Anime & Comics · Zaelum