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Marvel : Different Peter Parker
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Hello Guys, This is going to my first Marvel fanfic so please support some events and timeline can be different from the original.
Sypnosis : I got the idea of writing this fanfic from another Marvel fanfic so some of you may Say that it is copied but I don't care about that.
As for Mc he will be very OP From start and get wishes from God so please support.
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Wish fulfillment stories are not usually a trope that is about good writing. Usually it's mostly about bringing forth a vision of the author's, and this author has chosen to unify a large selection of world's and alter a large selection of stories into one. Reincarnated as Peter Parker, use of Haki, powers from Bleach. Story feels very rushed as well, as events that could be slowed down are explained in passing as if it is not important. The grammar can be excused because english is not the author's first language. However the switch from first person to third person is quite jarring and occurs haphazardly.
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Why tha ghelm would you claim that youre fixing grammar in the story even though it still sucks. Not only youre stealing other people works to satisfy your ego as a "creator", you dont even put any effort into it.
This may be the worst grammar, spelling, sentence structure and storytelling I have ever read. Wow. This may be a perfect example of telling and not showing.
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Interesting ideas but not much else. It's about Peter Parker but I'm not sure why. Disregard the quality of the writing or story, it feels like a basic Chinese web novel. Every character feels out of place in a Marvel story, or western story for that matter. Fine to read if you have time to kill I guess.
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What can I say other than be very disappointed. From chapters 1 - 3 I can already see bad starting golden finger and MC had no brains. From chapters 4 - 5 where I dropped because of boredom.
Atrocious grammar, I couldn't even make it through a single chapter. .......................................................................
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Went downhill when he put JL in here plus the writing is barely average. The plot is a mess. There's nothing good here. Most of stuff here is FORCED, there's no character development etc.
Great story and will the Character get a large harem in the future? Also can you do a list of women in is harem too.๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Honestly this is a strong meh. I am not one to review if its an average book but i just had to due to the wasted potential. author, I know its hard to write, i myself tried it, its bad, but u have some massive errors 1-GET GRAMMARLY, its free, or just write on google docs 2-Your MC is a xinxia/Wuxia MC, make him change his attitude and become smarter. 3-The thing about Karma made no sense, donating to people doesnt=good deed. MC just threW money, never knew were it meant, or did smth to help with hiS time and Body. Clear these, and u have more
shoppinglist of powers mc can solve everything by creating something other heroes act out of character painting them evil'ish or atleast bad poor grammar plain boring
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ugh another indonesian author why every time i see indonesian novel their novel always unreadable also how come there's 5 star in the review this novel is unreadable its even worse than CN mtl translation i stil can read mtl translation but not this one
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i can look past the poor understanding of English as its very common on here but the perversion of the characters is something I cannot every action except mj leaving peter for harry is completely out of character the especially the part where aunt may kicks him out for a tumor in any rendition of spiderman aunt may is his pillar of support so the fact you would change her character this much is just spitting on the entire source material read at your own risk
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