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male LV 6

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2017-04-23 Bergabung Brazil
Lencana 8

Moments 9
matheusmdantas
matheusmdantas
2 years ago
Commented

I don't understand. Wasn't the previous raikage who order the kidnaping?

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matheusmdantas
3 years ago
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Possible Hatsu Background: Sub has showed again and again the his greatest goal in life is be the strongest nen user so he could do anything he wants. Name: Nen teacher or something (requires more thought) Nen type: Conjuration, Enhancer (maybe?) Descripion: Summon an object or satient being that gives the person who summoned it advice on the most eficient exercise to boost the proficiency in the use of one type of nen, according to the present level of mastery of the user. Conditions/Limitations: 1. Can only be used for Sub 2. The type of nen chosen is random, except Special. 3. Can only be used again after the user mastered the exercise. 4. During that period the user can only use two types of nen (the one being trained and another chosen by de user).

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matheusmdantas
3 years ago
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Possible Hatsu Background: Sub has showed again and again the his greatest goal in life is be the strongest nen user so he could do anything he wants. Name: Nen teacher or something (requires more thought) Nen type: Conjuration, Enhancer (maybe?) Descripion: Summon an object or satient being that gives the person who summoned it advice on the most eficient exercise to boost the proficiency in the use of one type of nen, according to the present level of mastery of the user. Conditions/Limitations: 1. Can only be used for Sub 2. The type of nen chosen is random, except Special. 3. Can only be used again after the user mastered the exercise. 4. During that period the user can only use two types of nen (the one being trained and another chosen by de user).

matheusmdantas
matheusmdantas
3 years ago
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Couldn't he just eat it? Wouldn't his bloodline evolve further by absorbing it?

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matheusmdantas
4 years ago
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Dear Author, please pay atention to the length of the phrases. Your story is truly well written, with good grammar. However, the lack of punctuation nearly kills the mood to keep reading. This would be an example of how this paragraph could be better written: [As long as there is want and desire, there will always be conflict. Its a part of being human. Sometimes conflict could lead to growth, but it can just as easily lead to destruction, if you don't learn from your mistakes.]

matheusmdantas
matheusmdantas
4 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter! Please don't drop the novel!

matheusmdantas
matheusmdantas
4 years ago
Commented

Thanks for the chapter! Coudn't he create a Template with Innates relating to [Enhanced Comprehention of Laws] and [Teaching]? It would be the greatest teacher!

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matheusmdantas
4 years ago
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Middle Area, 20th Floor, Team Vahn: - Scout Fenrir Hinata Yoruichi - Guide Nami - Fisherman Hinata Youruichi - Light Bearer Vahn Nami - Spear Bearer Vahn (with a bow?) Fenrir (throwing ice spears? - Wave Controller Vahn Hinata

matheusmdantas
matheusmdantas
4 years ago
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Thanks for the chapter! Very interesting developments! I have doubts regarding the relationship Vahn < Laev-tan > Gandr though. Who will wield her from now on?