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Hunter X Hunter: Grounded
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MC reborn in HxH world, in Meteor City... he has no cheats, so let's see how he survives.
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Joker stories are always the best................................................................................ ..........................
The character design is poor. he isn't a complex character, we know very little besides the fact he used to work in construction. completely one dimensional. What's more he doesn't react or think like the average human being he is put out to be, he makes psychopathic and completely immoral decisions, doesn't care who he hurts and enjoys inflicting pain in himself. He doesn't have any flaws apparently. it's bad writing choices. The writing itself isn't poor, but the pacing is, he spends 25 chapters with a bunch of nobodies, nearly half the story is about a tournament, and he has yet to meet one of the main characters and Canon has yet to begin. complete and utter letdown.
Lmao someone said โi havenโt read it yet but i trust youโ lmaooo and u know what holyjoker, i agree with him ๐๐๐๐๐
dear author, your story is exceptional and puts sweetness in my life. I wish you a good continuation and I hope you will finish this fabulous story or start another one. A reader who appreciates you
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just read the fuckin chapter I guarantee you won't regret it.... just read it, that is all I have to say.... read it... ReAd iT.... RrrEEAaaddD IiiITttTt ....
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this is not a hunter x hunter fanfic, this is only the nen system and world, the characters are a bunch of lame OC from mc to everyone else bunch of lame OC
i dont get it with fanfic hatsus. its either so broken its ridiculous. or just boring. this one is the latter. hur dur my nen has the properties of dirt and stone. wow. cool dude. dirt man. mc is also a psycho, kinda wish that was in either the synopsis or tags. relationships were unclear for like 60% of the novel and then it kinda clicks that mc is a genuine psycho, that dosent care for anyone. also, idk why mc goes off with random filler characters when he had an established relationship with machi. boring loser teammates with broken abilities that are somehow cooler/more interesting than MC.
Really enjoyed this fic! The characters feel more real than the ones from your other fic. Just that Sub has a modicrum of empathy makes a world of difference! Will you update the story? I saw that there are 89 chapters of this on p*treon?
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this is really really really good! probably the second best ranfic I've ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!โฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธโฅ๏ธ
Great story but dropped when he wanted to make an organization. I am not saying I want him to be a loner but creating organization are pretty pointless and limit the possibilities of what you can do with the story. The organization will also slow down his progress a lot. Correct me if I am wrong but his goal was to be basically free and even though he would be the leader of the organization he wouldn't be free it is restricting. Anyways that is just what I think but it is very well written and I most likely will pick it back up later on.
Just trust in joker he knows how tO WRite one hell of a fanfic and he is creative and mOst of his mc are kinda Have twisted personality Trust in joker!
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I have read a few of this writers works before and I always find them interesting at the very least, the latest being his work on revorn as a fishman in one piece so far I have read up to chapter 31 and the story seems to be good so far. Although I am starting to see a pattern of the author writing about main characters with twisted personalities. I personally am fine with it but I would like a better back story and reasoning for the MC ruthlessness in the Authors next work. I would also like to see this author's take on more simple minded characters, taking a bigger role in the narrative because from what I have read so far the only one's that take part in the Authors narrative are very extreme characters. I believe that I caught a glimpse of the Authors take on such characters during his side story of one of Jaws children joining luffy in his one piece story. I'd like the authpr to explore such a scenario in a future story. I am however looking forward to seeing who will be joining the deadly sins in this story. I can see hisoka joining as the deadly sin of lust and (although a long shot) I can see the author finding a way to get ant king to join as well, even if it is just a trick because I have noticed how the author likes to screw over canon towards the end of a story. Overall I am looking forward to see if Sub will join the group that Jaws refused to join at the end of this story and his journey to meet them.
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Love the OC characters like Sub, Azula and Karla,their HATSU is unique and well thought out along with the restrictions and conditions, hell i reckon Azula's HATSU deserves a Fanfic of its own but moving on, The Mc's name is Sub, he is reincarnated in meteor city around the same time as Gon and Killua are born, he has no golden finger or system except his future knowledge(as a HxH lover I can attest that the author knows what he is doing) and a talent comparable to Killua but probably more creative and hardworking than anyone in the HxH universe.
I think this story is much better than your first hunter x hunter story. Now I can only hope that the MC will find one person to care about.
i have high expectations for this story sir joker๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐