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this is not a hunter x hunter fanfic, this is only the nen system and world, the characters are a bunch of lame OC from mc to everyone else bunch of lame OC
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i dont get it with fanfic hatsus. its either so broken its ridiculous. or just boring. this one is the latter. hur dur my nen has the properties of dirt and stone. wow. cool dude. dirt man. mc is also a psycho, kinda wish that was in either the synopsis or tags. relationships were unclear for like 60% of the novel and then it kinda clicks that mc is a genuine psycho, that dosent care for anyone. also, idk why mc goes off with random filler characters when he had an established relationship with machi. boring loser teammates with broken abilities that are somehow cooler/more interesting than MC.
honestly I liked the other stories that you wrote, but this one has a major something that I didn't quite like, tis something us the character development of th mc, even the female lead isn't really that enjoyable... anyway I think that the story it is better than most of other fmhxh fanfic.
The grammar could be improved. Overall i like the story,characters and the pacing I just hope author san can continue this work. I can understand the reason for poor update as designing abilities for mob character will be a pain
The character design is poor. he isn't a complex character, we know very little besides the fact he used to work in construction. completely one dimensional. What's more he doesn't react or think like the average human being he is put out to be, he makes psychopathic and completely immoral decisions, doesn't care who he hurts and enjoys inflicting pain in himself. He doesn't have any flaws apparently. it's bad writing choices. The writing itself isn't poor, but the pacing is, he spends 25 chapters with a bunch of nobodies, nearly half the story is about a tournament, and he has yet to meet one of the main characters and Canon has yet to begin. complete and utter letdown.
Really enjoyed this fic! The characters feel more real than the ones from your other fic. Just that Sub has a modicrum of empathy makes a world of difference! Will you update the story? I saw that there are 89 chapters of this on p*treon?
i really like your novels i like how you dont give characters op powers right from the start [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Really nice for the moment. but the mc says he will live his life without regret but he is influenced by his environment frankly how the assassins sent can be so weak no challenge yet it is the f **** ng meteor city
One of the best HxH fics i've read. Please tell me there are tons of more chapters coming up. It would be a tragedy if this has been abandoned.
I love this story I think this is my favourite mc ...............................................................................................
this is really really really good! probably the second best ranfic I've ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
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dear author, your story is exceptional and puts sweetness in my life. I wish you a good continuation and I hope you will finish this fabulous story or start another one. A reader who appreciates you
Best Hxh fic I've read, its super interesting and doesn't get boring after a certain point. The mc also doesn't get extremely and boringly strong very fast and the characters are interesting. There is also consistent character development. Pretty good.
I mean... it's HolyJoker, what did you expect? AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
I just recently started reading and im in love with this. It is a great story and I truly reccomend it. Though it is probly better enjoyed by those who know hxh more.
Great story but dropped when he wanted to make an organization. I am not saying I want him to be a loner but creating organization are pretty pointless and limit the possibilities of what you can do with the story. The organization will also slow down his progress a lot. Correct me if I am wrong but his goal was to be basically free and even though he would be the leader of the organization he wouldn't be free it is restricting. Anyways that is just what I think but it is very well written and I most likely will pick it back up later on.
Just trust in joker he knows how tO WRite one hell of a fanfic and he is creative and mOst of his mc are kinda Have twisted personality Trust in joker!
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haven't watched it yet but like MJ,you know it's a W. -----------------------------------------------------------6---66666666-----------------
Cool book, interestingly written, the main thing does not change the canon of history. The heroes are well written and the abilities are matched evenly. But the chapters are too young.
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this is not a hunter x hunter fanfic, this is only the nen system and world, the characters are a bunch of lame OC from mc to everyone else bunch of lame OC
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i dont get it with fanfic hatsus. its either so broken its ridiculous. or just boring. this one is the latter. hur dur my nen has the properties of dirt and stone. wow. cool dude. dirt man. mc is also a psycho, kinda wish that was in either the synopsis or tags. relationships were unclear for like 60% of the novel and then it kinda clicks that mc is a genuine psycho, that dosent care for anyone. also, idk why mc goes off with random filler characters when he had an established relationship with machi. boring loser teammates with broken abilities that are somehow cooler/more interesting than MC.
honestly I liked the other stories that you wrote, but this one has a major something that I didn't quite like, tis something us the character development of th mc, even the female lead isn't really that enjoyable... anyway I think that the story it is better than most of other fmhxh fanfic.
The grammar could be improved. Overall i like the story,characters and the pacing I just hope author san can continue this work. I can understand the reason for poor update as designing abilities for mob character will be a pain
The character design is poor. he isn't a complex character, we know very little besides the fact he used to work in construction. completely one dimensional. What's more he doesn't react or think like the average human being he is put out to be, he makes psychopathic and completely immoral decisions, doesn't care who he hurts and enjoys inflicting pain in himself. He doesn't have any flaws apparently. it's bad writing choices. The writing itself isn't poor, but the pacing is, he spends 25 chapters with a bunch of nobodies, nearly half the story is about a tournament, and he has yet to meet one of the main characters and Canon has yet to begin. complete and utter letdown.
Really enjoyed this fic! The characters feel more real than the ones from your other fic. Just that Sub has a modicrum of empathy makes a world of difference! Will you update the story? I saw that there are 89 chapters of this on p*treon?
i really like your novels i like how you dont give characters op powers right from the start [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Really nice for the moment. but the mc says he will live his life without regret but he is influenced by his environment frankly how the assassins sent can be so weak no challenge yet it is the f **** ng meteor city
One of the best HxH fics i've read. Please tell me there are tons of more chapters coming up. It would be a tragedy if this has been abandoned.
I love this story I think this is my favourite mc ...............................................................................................
this is really really really good! probably the second best ranfic I've ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
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dear author, your story is exceptional and puts sweetness in my life. I wish you a good continuation and I hope you will finish this fabulous story or start another one. A reader who appreciates you
Best Hxh fic I've read, its super interesting and doesn't get boring after a certain point. The mc also doesn't get extremely and boringly strong very fast and the characters are interesting. There is also consistent character development. Pretty good.
I mean... it's HolyJoker, what did you expect? AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
I just recently started reading and im in love with this. It is a great story and I truly reccomend it. Though it is probly better enjoyed by those who know hxh more.
Great story but dropped when he wanted to make an organization. I am not saying I want him to be a loner but creating organization are pretty pointless and limit the possibilities of what you can do with the story. The organization will also slow down his progress a lot. Correct me if I am wrong but his goal was to be basically free and even though he would be the leader of the organization he wouldn't be free it is restricting. Anyways that is just what I think but it is very well written and I most likely will pick it back up later on.
Just trust in joker he knows how tO WRite one hell of a fanfic and he is creative and mOst of his mc are kinda Have twisted personality Trust in joker!
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haven't watched it yet but like MJ,you know it's a W. -----------------------------------------------------------6---66666666-----------------
Cool book, interestingly written, the main thing does not change the canon of history. The heroes are well written and the abilities are matched evenly. But the chapters are too young.
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