/ Fantasy / White Snake
Ringkasan
[Host has given chance for reincarnation.]
Host:"What?"
[Accessing user character/personality/behavior]
"Am i really dead?"
..............................
..................................
.......................................
[Compatibility with 3 ancient god...]
[Brahma = 12.5%]
[Vishnu = 28%]
[Shiva = 53%]
[Generating forms based on ancient god Shiva]
[1. Vampire
2. Snake
3. Dark elf
4. Human
5. Fallen Angel
6. Minotaur
7.Lich]
"Hmm, what is my personality?"
[Character/Personality/Behavior:- aggressive, aloof, arrogant, cruel, cynical, dishonest, domineering, greedy, impolite, obsessive, ruthless, selfish, unkind, perverted and โฆ]
"I agree with this personality but what about me being handsome, honest, kind, caring.โ
[Narcissist]
--------------------------------------------------
Chapter schedule:-
tagar
Penggemar
-
![Hungry_Mantuei]()
Hungry_Mantuei Berpartisipasi 3 -
![Sunshine_7995]()
Sunshine_7995 Berpartisipasi 3 -
![Nirvana_Saint]()
Nirvana_Saint Berpartisipasi 2
Status Power Mingguan
-- Peringkat
Power 
-- Power
stone Anda Mungkin Juga Menyukai
66Ulasan-ulasan
3.86
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
Bagikan pikiran Anda dengan orang lain
Tulis ulasan
I like this novel a lot continue like thisss pliss๐๐๐๐ โ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธโ๏ธ
okay im putin ths score cause i wil read more after, but ive got an issue here, he said he didnt want vampire because well how would he do if he end up alone wwithout any blood. But it can also be said for all the others races with food or water.... only lich wouldn't have to worry about that
1) Writing Quality is Poor. 2) The Reasons for choosing his Race as a Snake is... I don't even know... I didn't get it at ALL. 3) His reasons for not choosing another Race are just as confusing. 4) His personality seems a bit weird. 5) His 'tragic' past is incredibly short and doesn't make much sense.
The concept is kinda fun to read. But im not sure how it will be executed. I will need to wait till there's 100+ chapters to decide. My real rating would be around 3 to 3.5stars, but I rated higher to motivate author and bring up the ratings for this novel. Good luck!
seems to be doing a good job. but MC seems like dumbo. make it so that he grows to be a little cunning and smart. the SYSTEM is OP. explanation seems to repeat again.
------------------------------------------------------------- If you have any question about novel, then you can ask here. I will try to answer it if possible. Time limit :- Today only --------------------------------------------------------------
Membuka SPOILER
Dozens of chapters with an extremely annoying MC arguing with a somehow more annoying A.I. If that wasn't enough the writing quality was terrible. How can something go so wrong...? Read and find out...
Authors needs to use logical reasoning or make up something reasonable. Idk of the author thinks itโs funny always making mc and system bicker with each other but itโs annoying..... And the authors makes too much bad jokes which gets annoying Ex: at the beginning of the novels wouldnโt stop talking about sperms and joking about how many babies they made something like 133555 idk I forgot. Mc is like a little annoying ***** and the system is the annoying. Then there is needing the permission of the system to name himself which is annoying. Lets not forget he needs to have sex with a female whether it be a monster or human so his gender doesnโt change. Also his reasoning for choosing a snake as his reincarnation is retarded. The grammar mistakes are annoying but I can look past that. If the author can change the mcโs personality (make him less annoying) and make him use proper logic or give reasonable explanation then I would say the story is great... And stop making jokes with sperms so annoying, and the system should be there to server him idk why itโs so annoying. Edit: improved the rating since it's more logical in the later chapters but there still annoying jokes or what you want to call it.
Dude, the toxicity of this novel is unparalleled. why the heck did you have to do that way? It had potential but now is just a waste. I hope you reboot this novel in a better way, bye.
after reading till chapter 13 , i can say that it is good like WMW but pplus with humour . the story is quite slow tbh ..maybe because of author style of writing (like trying to write an essay in roundabout way to reach the word limit) if not it is easy to understand . mc is like a normal virgin with a brain and most of the part occupied by *** but can still use his brain and quick to understand. i feel bad that this novel is so underrated . As it only has 13, i cant say how good it will be in later stage but i hope it continue as it is with faster pace and lilttle backstory and hope it wont have mmuch side character pov
Membuka SPOILER
I really liked the story and how things were progressing, there also aren't many stories like this out there, so it's really a shame that this got dropped(i assume it was dropped cos its been like a year sine the last update).
Experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience experience
Membuka SPOILER
mnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
Membuka SPOILER
๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
This story is trash the grammar is bad, it took 4 chapters for the story to even start, the dialog is dumb, the system is stupid the mc is trash overall the story and characters are trash wouldn't read waste of time..
I donโt want you to drop this story. Pls, donโt. Everything is ok, you have some mistakes, but as far as Iโve seen, you listen to your auditory and correct them. With the snake choice, I donโt see any problems. Itโs your right to choose it anyway.
I'm waiting for the continuation please I just go to this page to see if you post Please don't let this novel You are fresh and the history is perfect Pls
Please comeback soon! im really enjoying this series! cant wait until he enters his ***** stage and gets the armour from the cover art. right now all i can imagining is kirito / sephiroth look. while the higher art had helped my imagination run wild. this is a beautiful and unique story. worth the reward and votes!
i don't know what to write. hope you're having a nice day. wishing you all the best. keep writing good novels like this which makes our day.
Just showing support.......... .............................................. ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐