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Ringkasan
Overlord, only one man deserves that name
He was said to be immortal,
At the peak of cultivation,
Yet he perished all the same.
Aeons have passed,
The universe needs a new Overlord
Yet no one person suits the task,
But what about two?
Henceforth Overlord shall belong to a power,
And not to a name.
He is almighty,
She is perfection,
Together We Are Absolute.
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The story in interesting and although it needs some corection, the plot actually has a spark. Would love to read more. please keep it up. :)
The storry seems getting intersting as it continues with more chapters. I can already forsee fhe challenges coming for the two kids! Good luck, way to go!
Good luck on the progress of this story. The story looks to have a good plot and having a smooth flow so far. I wish it would get the attention of the readers.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.