Undefeated : Fallen Blood

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DarkAimz

Please write a review if you like reading this even if its bad review it will encourage me to write more <3 This story will not drop and hopefully I will not disappoint you, It's going to be a long one and will improve with each chapter. Thank you :)

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DarkAimz

Thank you so much for your support. I will try my best to at least post 7 - Chapters per week if I miss a day I will add two next days. Please comment on chapters and write a review to motivate.

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Habab bhai acha likh rahe ho ruko mat maza arraha he zyada apne ap ko mat thakana warna subah subah me pohonch jao ga ankho ke niche waise hi kalak ayi parhi he is kam ko apne life ke bad lana

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ideas are easy to come up with but hard to share keep going and dont stop its good but stability of updates is a problem if your story is complete then get an editor and post or something like that keep sharing love

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Giving 2 stars less sorry because of late updates and a little bit writing not that it matters I can still understand what's going on and make sure to add something so we can support you.

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Write more man this has potential. Do not stop I don't want to type more the **** tells me to do so :)))) Adding more letters lol ... good luck

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DarkAimz

I am back I will be adding two chapters daily I am sorry I was gone for python exams. I will now regularly post thank you very much :) Regards Author

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Godonly

Well world background is amazing the author has taken more time in presenting the world in second chapter i have came here from an crappy novel hope will get constant updates

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javascriptC

hahahah its amazing i liked it since its modern world and not those bull**** after life **** they are all same with lame and ****y i hope you don't stop it thats all

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Habab

I Think I will read it if it continues :3 it looks like it's going to be good hope it's not all about high school. i dont read orignals but i will try it

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kingtusli

I think it will be a really good read as I love this kind of story through the writing is little bit poor but still understandable hope updates frequently.